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? Task 1:How many steps to write an English passage? Task 2:How to make our writing outstanding? Task3:How to use advanced words and phrases?
Task4:How to use plentiful sentence patters?

Task 1:How many steps to write an English passage?
? 一审(Examine):审格式、审要求; ? 二列(List):列提纲(短语); ? 三写(Write):写句子; ? 四 连(Link) :把句子连成文章; ? 五抄(Copy):抄写文章: ? 六查(Check):复查一边。
? Remember: Use is a second nature.

Six steps for the writing practice: My favorite way of communication)
Step 1: examine the topic
Style:__议__论__文__(__A_r_g_u_m__e_n_ta_t_iv_e__W__ri_ti_n_g__)________ tense:____p_re_s_e_n_t_____ person:_t_h_i_rd__a_n_d__fi_rs_t___ Paragraphs:
Paragraph 1: 提出主题(Main idea): like communicating by computer most
Paragraph 2: 论证主题(Supporting paragraph): why?
深化结论(Conclusion):bring people all Paragraph 3: over the world closer

Step 2: list the main points
1. three ways of communication 2. like communicating by computer 3. easily send emails to each other 4. too slow to communicate by letters 5. chat to each other face to face 6. difficult to do so on the phone 7. provide people with varieties ofinformation 8. broaden our horizon 9. bring people closer

Step 3: make some sentences:
1. There are three ways of communication. 2.Of the three, I like communicating by computer. 3. People can easily send emails to each other at
any place and at any time. 4.It’s too slow a way to do so by writing letters. 5.People can chat to each other face to face by
computer. 6.It’s difficult to do so on the phone. 7.Surfing the Internet can provide people with
varieties of information. 8.It is a good way to broaden our horizon. 9. Communication on the Internet brings people
closer.

Step 4&5: connect the sentences and make some polish . Step 6: Copy it out carefully and clearly.

考生作品1(seven errors)
Before long, people of different place communicate by writing letters. As time goes, peop-l-e---w--o--u--lpdlaractehser use phone than use letters and now the way which is popular to us is using the computer for communicating. Comparing with letters and computer, I prefer to use telephone.--------compared
Why I like to use it? First, I think convenience is of great value t∧o duos. Expensive though it is, it can help us talk to people who we miss any time. Second, so it is small that we can keep it in ourselves. Third, we can assko ssommaleloisneit for help if we are in tro-u--bolne. Fanily, we can use it anywhere.
Such are the reasons whyFIinparlelyfer telephone. I think most of you shall agree with me.
will

…In my opinion, communicating by letters is the best way.

The man who hasn’t been to the Great Wall isn’t a true

man. I think the man who hasn’t communicated by letters

isn’t a true man. In the river of history, letters play an

important role in communicating with each other. In

addition, papers aren’t harmful to our health and letters can express our---t-h--o---u--g--h---tpsatpheorroisung’thly. I likecommunicating by

letters best. Hardly had I received a letter when I opened it.

When I see my friends’ letters, it seems that my friends

come to see me. In other words, I always feel delighted to

hear from my friends and relatives. What if our life could

be like without letters? (龚惠祯)

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sw--a--l--l-o--w-----d--o---e--s-n-W’thmatackoeualdsouumr mlifeer. I wish more people

support my opinion and communicating---b--yholepteters. Believe

it or not, communicating by letters will make you happy.

? 江西细化高考评分标准:
? 3分— 条理不清,思维紊乱,语言支离破碎或大 部分聚在均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
? 8分— 基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。 有较多的严重语言错误。
? 13分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不清楚,文 字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有些是严重 错误。
? 18分—切题。表达思想清楚,语言表达能力较强, 文字连贯,但有些语言错误,甚至严重错误。
? 23分—切题。表达思想清楚,语言表达能力强, 文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本上无语言错误。

Task 2:How to make our writing outstanding?
1.to cover all the contents 2.advanced words and phrases; 3.different plentiful sentence patterns; 4.correct con丰ju富n的ctions. 5.some proverbs. 6.Rhetoric(修辞)

Task3:How to use advanced words and phrases
? 1.Cellphones are better than computers and letters.
? Cellphones take advantage over computers and letters.(陈晗)
? 2. Convenience is very valuable to us. ? Convenience is of great value to us.(黄鑫)
? 3.Because of its great use, many people have a computer.
? Thanks to its great use, many people possess a computer.

1.较高级词汇
1. 多实少虚 : nice 2. 短语优先:

generous, humorous,
interesting, smart,
gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable(好客的)

Ihemree.t them

I came across them there.

I want it.

I am looking forward to it.

3弃旧取新:

We all phoavsesess the same oppchoarntcue.nity

There exariest more opponents(对手).

Task4:How to use abundant sentence
patters
? 1.The computer makes the world smaller. ? It’s the computer that makes the world
smaller.(谢平) ? 2.The phone is convenient and it has more
functions than before. ? Not only is the phone convenient but it has more
functions than before.(刘正良) ? 3.We use the computer so conveniently that we
only need to knock on the keyboard.(沈园园) ? So conveniently do we use the computer that
what we should do is to knock on the keyboard.

?4. Some people think a phone is better to communicate by.
?There exist some people who think …(刘 宏万)
?5.Reading letters is a joy.
?Reading letters is as tasting good tea, which is a joy.(钟明秀)

1.我们都知道他是黄女士的儿子。

?Lower level: ?We all know he is Ms Huang’s son. ?High level: ?He is Ms Huang’s son, which we all know. ?As is known to us, he is Ms Huang’s son. ?What is known to us is that he is Ms
Huang’s son. ?It’s known to us that he is Ms Huang’s son.

2.丰富的语法结构

各非

with



种 从



倒 装

句语

复 合 宾

修 调虚等 辞 句拟等




运用多种语法结构,句式灵活多变,可 以使文章增色不少。

Homework
写作内容:根据下列提示写一篇短文。 1.有人认为钱是幸福之本(source of happiness 2 有人认为金钱是万恶之源(root of evil) 3 我的看法。
字数:120个字左右。


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