2015 届高考英语二轮复习书面表达专项指导训练 41
一 、书面表达（本大题共 3 小题，共 75 分） 1.（2014 年北京卷）第二节（20 分） 假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英 语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。 注意： 1. 词数不少于 60. 2. 短文的开头已给出，不计
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. 【答案解析】 【考点】考察看图作文 【写作指导】 本文属于看图作文。 叙述的是李华和同学们向学校建议解决自行车存放的问题。 属于记 叙文，使用第一人称和一般过去时。 要点：1.在自行车存放处前面，我看见很多人都拥挤在一起；2.找到几个同学一起讨论 具体解决方法。3.找到校长提出建议；4.校方采纳建议，多开了一个进出的门。 看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字， 再 根据这些要点谋篇布局。 要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来， 除了能表达清楚图画 中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单 调。如果是记叙文类的写作素材，考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、 过程、结果这六个要素。 【一句多译】
在我们学校自行车存放处有一个长久以来就存在的问题。 （1）There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school （2）The parking place for bikes was an existing problem for a long time in our school。 【参考范文】 One possible version There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school, I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggfestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.
2.北师大教授顾明远对“三好学生”评比叫停，引起了很大反响。请根据下表给 “Teens”写一 篇 120 字左右的文章并表明你对三好学生评比的看法。标题和首句已给出。 反对叫停 1．青少年需要榜样 2．学生应以学习为主，成绩第 一 参考单词：merit students Should the System be changed? In response to the proposal of cancelling the merit students selection, 【答案解析】 【参考范文】 Should the system be changed? In response to the proposal of cancelling the merit students selection, people’s opinions differ. Some people think that with the increasingly fierce competition, more and more talented
支持叫停 1．有碍学生个性发展 2．与提倡创新精神相背
youths are needed. Only one single standard for judging good students may discourage the students from growing in different ways. It is also against the advocating of pioneering spirit. Others, however, say adolescents can’t grow up without models, and merit students represent diligence and adolescents excellence. To the students’ academic excellence comes first. In my view, times are different and the criteria should be changed to a degree because the job market demands large numbers of personnel with practical ability and skills. As a standard, it will encourage students to explore their potentials and develop their ability to think and solve problems independently, which is the basis of education. 3.1 日是世界第十八个艾滋病日， 其主题是 Stop AIDS， Keep the Promise。 围绕这个主题， 《中 学生英文报》举办征文竞赛。请根据以下内容，写一篇征文。 (1)根据下列图表，说明我国艾滋病的现状；
(2)为了遏制艾滋病的蔓延和关爱艾滋病患者，作为中学生，我们应该：①认识艾滋病 的危害；②自尊自爱，远离毒品；③……；④……(第③、④小点请自己发挥).要求：(I) 短文需包括所给要点； (2)短文的开头与结尾已为你写好； (3)字数 100 左右。
AIDS is a deadly disease, which is spreading fast throughout our country.
Let' s remember: Stop AIDS, Keep the Promise. 【答案解析】One Possible Version: AIDS is a deadly disease, which is spreading fast throughout our country. As the chart shows, by the end of August, 典型例题精选 ere had been 102,387 people infected with the HIV virus. The number of people who got AIDS came up to 30,158 and 7,643 people died of this disease. The AIDS virus can be transmitted through many routes. Taking drugs is the main cause of transmission. In our coun- try in 典型例题精选 9% of AIDS sufferers were drug takers. In order to prevent the fast spread of AIDS, we middle school students must fully drugs. Besides, we shouldn' t look down upon those AIDS sufferers. What they need most is/are care and love. Let' s remember: Stop AIDS, Keep the Promise.