Which composition feels more attractive, why?
Which sentence do you think attr
acts the teachers?
1.The character of this gala is that it relates people’s lives 2.The most striking feature of this gala is its _______ traditionally close link with ordinary people’s lives. ____________________________
3.Young people don’t want to watch TV ,so they pay attention to other forms of celebration. 4.Young people focus their attention on other forms of __________________________ celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV. _________________________
影响给分的因素之二： 影响给分的因素之二： 文中所采用的语言材料
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜； B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
Find some similar words or phrases of the followings perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent
1. good 2. think
in one's opinion/view hold the view that … it is widely shared that …
wise bright smart intelligent cute
改变句子结构,与众不同 改变句子结构 与众不同
1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。 唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。 唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震 A strong/big earthquake happened in Tangshan in the 1980s. There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s. A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tang Shan in the 1980s. 2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了 你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了. 你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了 I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning. Your letter of August 15th reached/got to me this morning.
1.He got excited when he heard the news. Hearing the news, he got excited. →___ 2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty. Hungry and thirsty →_________________, the girl went home. 3.I studied Chinese, English and Physics at school. The main subjects I studied at school →______________________________include Chinese, English and Physics . 4.It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers. Early in the morning →_________________, Mr. Smith was watering in the garden _________________.
1.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well. _______we were to see crops and vegetables growing well! →How glad 2. Radio broadcasts didn’t begin until 1920. →It was__________________________________________. not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began 3.He never speaks about his own family. does he speak about his own family →Never__________________________________________. 4.A notice is saying ”Please Save Water” on the wall. is a notice saying ”Please Save Water” →On the wall______________________________________. 5.Though he is a child, he knows a lot. Child though/as he is, he knows a lot →___________________________________.
and,then,also,besides,morever,what's more furthermore,in addition,more imortant
but,however,although,nonetheless,in spite of, conversely, on the contrary, on the other hand...
because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of...
in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion, in a word,on the whole...
William Shakespeare (2008高考湖南卷书面表达 高考湖南卷书面表达) 高考湖南卷书面表达 Do you know Hamlet? Have you read The Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favorite English writer and the man of all ages! Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ over the world, I like him because his comedies and ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ language; I admire him because his keen sights set me ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿___________________________ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿___________________________ thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! Since “Life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone had his own role to play. and I will try my best to play my role well.
小结： 1. 作文的卷面； -----整洁的卷面 2. 文章的语言； -----丰富的词汇 3. 行文的流畅； -----流畅的结构 4. 文章的思想； -----独到的见解