This morning I went to the shoes shop to buy a pair of new shoes. When I got there, I noticed a foreign lady talk to a salesgirl. But the salesgirl didn’t understand that the foreign was sayi
ng. They both looked worrying. I went up to help them. The lady is Australian. She wanted to buy a pair of travelling shoes. So I told it to the salesgirl. The lady was very much glad when she took it. She sings high praise for my spoken English. All of them expressed their thanks to me. I felt happy that I expressed myself free in English. 1 shoes 改为 shoe 2 talk 改为 talking 3 that 改为 what 4 worrying 改为 worried 5 Australian 前加上 an 6 删除 much 7 it 改为 them 8 sings 改为 sang 9 All 改为 Both 10 free 改为 freely Wall Street is famous street in New York City. It got its name from the wooden wall that was used to stand what the street now runs. The wall was built in 1600s. New York was then a Dutch city set up by people come from Holland in Europe which was called New Amsterdam. The America Indians were not always friend of the Dutch, nor were the English. But the Dutch built the wooden wall to protect themselves. The wall has gone now. But Wall Street reminds the people to New York of the Dutch who settled there. 1 is 后加 a 2 删除 was 3 what 改为 where 4 在介词 in 后加 the 5 come 改为 coming 6 America 改为 American 7 friend 改为 friends 8 But 改为 So 9 has 改为 is 10 to 改为 of Two years ago, I was in greatly depression. I worked hard at piano learning and devoted all my spare time to practice it. But I failed to pass the B Level Test, that made me quite disappointed. So I turned to my grandpa on advice when I got home. Hearing of what I told him, he smiled, “Test result sometimes cannot show your real ability and level. Thus, my progress should not be judged only by one test.” He encouraged me to work hard for the next year ’s B Level Test. I take my grandpa’s advice. Now the certificates of B Level is in front of me, but I’ve realized that the process of learning is much important.
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2 practice 改为 practicing 6 result 改为 results
3 that 改为 which 7 my 改为 your
4 on 改为 for 5 删除 of 8 take 改为 took Dear Peter,
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I am very glad to receive your email asking for information about the host family we have arranged you to stay with. Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, the house was big enough to enable you to have a room of your own. Apart from the convenient public transportation, our private car will make your visits difficult. Because all the family members can speak fluently English and have outgoing personalities, I’m sure you will have no trouble to communicating with them. Above all, they hosted the American student last year, through that they gained lots of experience. In addition, the hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food. Hope you enjoy your stay here. Yours, Li Hua 1 arrange 后加 for 2 Locating 改为 Located 3 was 改为 is
4 our 改为 their 5 difficult 改为 easy 6 fluently 改为 fluent 7 删除 to 8 the 改为 an 9 that 改为 which 10 hostess 改为 hostess’
You cannot imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn’t lose heart and kept run. All the students in the playground cheer me on, “Come on!” I was so encouraged that I ran fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very
proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time, I woke up and found me still in bed!
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