? There Is a Lot More to Life than a Job
Nowadays, the overwhelming majority of people put more emphasis on job, ignoring the significance of the developing a meaningful philosophy of li
fe. What’s worse, out of better job-hunting, today the most popular course on campus is not literature or history but accounting. Undoubtedly and undeniably, this abnormal phenomenon needs to be brought to a halt. Quite a few factors can account for the problem. To begin with, the sluggish world economy deteriorates the employment, making it more and more competitive to keep a well-paid job, thus, the employees feel less secure and reassured if they don’t pour all of energy, time, and effort into work. What’s more, a large proportion of middle-aged people, especially men, are under the illusion that the success in job guarantees the happiness in life, since how much money they earn from work, to some degree, plays an influential role in their quality of life. As essential and indispensable the job is in life, it is not everything in life, to ameliorate this situation, the proper and positive attitude toward life and job needs to be taken into consideration. First, develop interests. As is known to all, hobbies can enrich and diversify life, for example, music makes the stressed workers relaxed and drawing cultivates the artistic taste of all, including men and women, old and young. Second, spare more time for family members, lovers, and friends, which are of equal importance as job in life, only staying with them, can we get deeper insights into the true meaning of life.
1. 避免垃圾词汇“people”的反复使用，取而代之的是具体的指称，如：①the overwhelming majority of people, ② the employees, ③middle-aged people, ④the stressed workers, ⑤all, including men and women, old and young. 2. 注意表明句子逻辑关系的连接词的合理使用，如：What’s worse, first, second。 3. 一定要写中心句，来概括该段的主要内容。 4. 句型应丰富多变，注意长句和短句的结合，简单句和复杂句的结合。 5. 使用活跃的， 形象的， 积极的高级词汇， 如： job-hunting 找工作， undoubtedly and undeniably 不可否分， be brought to a halt 停止， sluggish 不景气，deteriorate 恶化，less secure and reassured 不安心，be under the illusion that 误以为，想当然地认为，spare 抽出时间，be of equal importance 一样重要。