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Picture-story Writing
Tasks today:
1.We will learn to get the correct main points of each picture and express them in a vivid(生动的) and fluent way. 2.We will learn to connect each picture with some linking words and explore hidden information. 3. We should be kept in mind to write a wonderful picture story.

议一议 1.What do you think of the drivers who ran over xiaoyueyue again and again? 2. What do you think of the 18 passers-by who turned a blind eye to the girl needing help? 3. Why were the 18 passers-by unwilling to help xiaoyueyue?

议一议 1.What do you think of the drivers who ran over xiaoyueyue again and again?

cruel , loss of humanity
2. What do you think of the 18 passers-by who turned a blind eye to the girl needing help?

indifferent; cold; showing no sympathy

3. Why were the 18 passers-by unwilling to help xiaoyueyue?
be afraid of being misunderstood… may get involved in the case… may become victims finally… none of their business

moral decline (道德的沦丧) A cruel, indifferent, cold world

4. If you were one of the passers-by, what would you do?
Sympathy is an instinct of ours. If we fail to save others in fear of danger or troubles, we will receive moral condemnation and public critics.

Picture writing
根据图画写一篇短文, 叙述小明与其妈妈发生 的故事。 要求: 1.不仅要表述出图中 的内容,还要就此现象 要发表自己的感想; 2.字数:100左右; 3.开头已给出。

Part 1 Picture Describing
1
2

Part2 Feelings and Comments 1.What do these two pictures want to tell us?
A.We should give a hand to others in need. B. The parents should teach their children to give a hand to others in need.

Presentation&Comment(10分钟)
问题 展示小组 点评小组 交叉立体目标

Picture One

Group2、3 Group1

Picture two

Group4、6 Group5

Further thinking

Group8、9 Group7

1.学科组长点评 声音洪亮点评清 晰到位+1分;能 对原有的句子进 行优化+1分 2.非展示小组成 员交叉互批作文。 3.其他同学:认 真倾听,积极思 考,重点内容。 有不明确或有补 充的要大胆提出。

Writing assessment
一、语言(language)
单词拼写是否正确 有没有语法错误 运用多种句式结构 运用优美的词汇和高级表达

二、内容(content)
主题明确 完整全面

三、结构(organization)
结构清晰,有条理

四、连贯(coherence)
正确使用连接词 行文通顺、流畅

Presentation&Comment(10分钟)
问题 展示小组 点评小组 交叉立体目标

Picture One

Group2、3 Group1

Picture two

Group4、6 Group5

Further thinking

Group8、9 Group7

1.学科组长点评 声音洪亮点评清 晰到位+1分;能 对原有的句子进 行优化+1分 2.非展示小组成 员交叉互批作文。 3.点评时同学们 认真倾听,积极 思考,重点内容。 有不明确或有补 充的要大胆提出。

Is it good enough? How to polish sentences?
一、单词变短语 二、单句变复句 三、主动变被动 四、陈述变倒装

……

一、单词变短语
[原文] Xiao Ming wanted to help her… [improve] Xiao Ming wanted to give her a hand… [原文] Helping others is important to the society. [improve] Helping others is of great importance to the whole society./ Helping others makes a big difference to building up a harmonious society.

二、单句变复句
[原文] Xiao Ming wanted to help the girl. But his mother prevented him doing that.
[improve] Xiao Ming was about to help the girl when his mother prevented him.

三、主动变被动
[原文] We should strengthen children’s moral standards. (道德水平) [improve] Children’s moral standards should be strengthened.

四、陈述变倒装
[原文] When we reach out our hands to people in need, we can get help from others. [improve] Only when we reach out our hands to people in need, can we get help from others.

没有逗号!!!!

五、强调句的应用
[原文] You knocked down the little girl.

[improve] It is you who/that knocked down the little girl.

六、分词的应用
[原文] [improve] The old man knocked down by others wronged me.

How to polish paragraphs?

语篇层面:善用连接词; 过渡句

As can be seen from the picture, it is 2 o’clock in the morning. Xiao Ming is sleeping soundly with the TV on. His mother turns off the TV and blames him for not having turned off the TV again. Many people prefer to watch TV at deep night. They always feel tired and fall asleep without turning off the TV. It is really a bad habit, which wastes much energy and harms our environment. Saving energy is of vital importance. We cannot stress the importance too much. People’s awareness of being environmentally friendly should be raised. Only when people realize the importance will they be willing to kick their bad habits.

As can be seen from the picture, it is 2 o’clock in the But Xiao Ming is sleeping soundly with the TV morning. _____ on. Seeing __________,( that 看到此情景) his mother turns off the TV and blames him for not having turned off the TV again. This is often the case in our daily life./Actually, such _______________________________________________ unusual in our daily life Many people phenomena arenot common ______________________________________. However they always prefer to watch TV at deep night. _________, feel tired and fall asleep without turning it off. It is really a bad habit, which wastes much energy and does harm to our environment. ______________________, As far as I’m concerned saving energy is of vital importance. We cannot emphasize it too much. Therefore _________, people’s awareness of being environmentally friendly should be raised. Only when they realize the importance will they be willing to kick their bad habits.

? 书写工整,卷面整洁
? 词层面:杜绝低级错误(拼写、时态、句
子主谓一致、句子无主语 …)

? 句层面: 一、单词变 短语

二、单句变 复 句 ……

三、主动变 被动 四、陈述变 倒装

? 文章连接自然,适当使用过渡词/句、连接词

Possible version: One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. He was on the point of giving a hand to the girl when his mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that or others will think it was you who knocked her down.” The next day, the mother was astonished to see Xiao Ming just turned a blind eye to the fallen oil bottle on the ground. Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I had got the bottle to stand, you would have thought I knocked it down.”

I totally disagree with the way Xiao Ming’s mother brings him up. Personally, parents should help their children become considerate and helpful, though helping others may sometimes bring them trouble. After all, helping others is an essential aspect of building up a harmonious society. We all need some help, right?

Homework:

1.Write your own composition. 2.Exchange your writings in your groups to correct them and polish them.


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