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汉阳二中导学案 高三英语

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同学们使用的丰富句式: 1、 What we first should do is to cherish mow as well as wonderful future .Never could we predict what the future has in store for us.(张思思) 2、 We

are supposed to be aware of the significance of today. (李瑀喆) 3、 As far as I am concerned, it makes on sense to regret or worry.Lost in regretting, I was in low spirits.(杨爽) 4、 Grasp today’s chance you are given,understand how you failed yesterday and future will surely shine a great light on you.(邹宇轩) 5、 I felt sa sad that my enthusiasm to study English gradually faded away.(周乾) 6、 Only in this way can we enjoy our fruitful life, not feeling bored and upset.(朱 胜) 7、 Hearing her words, I realized that I shouldn’t put off today’things.(张依) 8、 By putting what we have planned into reality, we can make today the ladder to tomorrow even the fundation of our vivid future.(童雪彤) 9、 Never can we go back to the past time, nor can we predict what future will be like.Feeling I was left behind, I was almost on the edge of cliff.(杨瑾) 10、 Accordingly, we shouldn’t have wasted the past time.(苏阳黎) 11、 Only by making full use of today can we make a splendid achievement。(王众 康) 12、 Hard as I had been working on math, I failed the exams over and over again.(许 学谦) 13、 We have strong ground to believe that futurt is not as terrible as we have experted.(周宇轩) 14、 We need to set out to do some worthwhile things today.(王胡轩) 15、 We can know the real meaning between today and present on the assumption that we make full of present.(李必博) 16、 Had it not been for his change, he would not have led a comfortable life.(欧阳颖 洁) 学习其他同学们使用的丰富句式: 17、 What impressed me most was when I was in middle school. However hard I tried, I couldn’t make great breakthrough.(方珍) 18、 Poor as he was, he never lost heart.(黄晶) 19、 I firmly believed that nothing could hold me back as soon as I attempted to get it over.(文瑶) 20、 Hard as the life is, one can realize his dream by having a strong mind. 文瑶) ( 21、 It is universally acknowledged that it is what we think that leads to what we do.(李祎) 22、 It is tough for him to live as a normal life as we have. But in his mind, nothing can prevent his devotion to science.(赵鹏) 23、 It is commonly believed that thinking more can make a man gain more. (郑舒 然) 24、 Tired as I was, I have studied math very hard since then. Every time I met with a difficult problem, I would stick on thinking about it.(张诗萌) 25、 It was not the result of the competition but my determination of being the first that really counted.(习永志)
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26、 Armed with the great mind, he gained confidence in himself and spared no effort to work for people.(邓泽) 27、 Thought is to us what a compass is to a ship.(邓泽) 28、 As is often the case, the secret of success lies in putting forward more aggressive ideas.(朱思昊) 29、 It’s high time that we should try our best to struggle for our dreams with aggressive ideas.(徐梦元) 30、 But for his desires to win or his minds to break through, he couldn’t have won the NO.1 in the world.(张可) 31、 Unsatisfied with my grades, I was determined to improve it by doing more difficult projects.(周雨杭) 32、 What mattered more was that I asked myself to take different measures in terms of each problem. (周雨杭)

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汉阳二中导学案 高三英语

写作建议: 一、紧扣高考英语作文评分标准 高考作文采用总体评分方式,集中在以下四个方面: -覆盖了题目提出的所有内容要点和要求; -应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,内容比较丰富; -在使用复杂结构或高级词汇时允许有些许错误; -有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,全文结构紧凑流畅。 二、高考英语作文行文四步骤 STEP1:确定文章框架,包括:时态、语态、格式、展开方式、开头结尾等。 STEP2:确定内容要点,包括:主要人物、时间地点、重要细节、合理发挥等。 STEP3:正式开始写作,整理思路成篇,行文连贯。 STEP4:检查订正笔误及粗心犯下的错误。 三、高考英语写作技巧 (一)掌握技巧: (1)注意篇章结构,合理布局 开始部分(opening paragraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。 正文部分(Body paragraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。 要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系,内容完整、连贯。前后呼 应,祛除与主题无关的内容。 (2)确定主题句 主题句是对全文的概括, 是文章的主旨。 它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。 通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头, 而后, 全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释, 扩展。 写主题句应注意以下几点: ①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 ②提炼出一句具有概括性的话 ③主题句应具有可读性,抓住、吸引读者。 四、2013 年高考满分作文欣赏: Sometimes, bad words are to us what knives to our body. I learned this from one of my experiences that I went through during Senior One school life. One day, when I was playing volleyball with my classmates in my PE class, I missed several chances that I should have grasped to meet the ball. What surprised me most was that my best friend Peter called me “fool”. I was so hurt that I almost accepted the fact that our friendship came to an end. It was my classmates’ comfort and persuasion as well as Peter’s apology and explanation that helped me realize he did have a strong sense of cooperation and teamwork. It wasn’t long before I forgave him and we were again close friends as ever. From this story, I am definitely convinced that bad words really have bad influence on us, and that only with a good understanding of them can we get through and get along well. 例 一、practice makes perfect As is widely acknowledged, practice makes perfect. I learned this from one of my experiences that I went through during Senior One school life. One day, when I was playing volleyball with my classmates in my PE class, I missed several chances that I should have grasped to meet the ball. I was so frustrated
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that I almost accepted the fact that I would never play well. It was my classmates’ comfort and encouragement as well as the teacher’s advice and instruction that helped me devote my spare time to practising playing every day. It wasn’t long before I became one of the most important players on our school team. From this story, I am definitely convinced that each one of us is able to dong something well, and that the more you practise, the more skillful you will become. 例二、confidence As is widely acknowledged, confidence is to us what ambition is to success. I learned this from one of my experiences that I went through during Senior One school life. One day, what surprised most was that I failed my first math exam for math is always my favorite and advantage. I was so frustrated that I almost accepted the fact that I would never learn it well. It was my classmates’ comfort and encouragement as well as my teacher’s advice and instruction that helped me gain and finally build up my confidence. I was determined to devoted myself to listening to the teacher attentively in class and to doing the homework seriously and patiently after class. It wasn’t long before math again became my favorite and advantage. From this story, I am definitely convinced that confidence is the key to success, and that we must believe in ourselves and we must believe that each one of us is able to do something well. 例三、courage As is widely acknowledged, courage is to us what the key to a door. I learned this from one of my experiences that I went through during Senior One school life. One day, when my teacher took us to the pool to teach us how to swim in my PE class, I was too scared to go into the water even though they tried to persuade me several times. I was so frustrated that I almost accepted the fact that I would never learn to swim well. It was my classmates’ comfort and encouragement as well as my teacher’s advice and instruction that helped me gather my courage to overcome the fear and finally joined them and enjoyed myself swimming in the pool. It wasn’t long before I became the best swimmer in our class. From this story, I am definitely convinced that courage is the key to success, and that only by facing the difficulty bravely can we solve it smoothly and calmly. 写作句型结构: (1) 开头段 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ (2) 正文段 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ (3) 结尾段
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 五、作文仿写:根据以上满分作文,仿写一篇与本次作文话题相关的作文。
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