第三部分 写作（共两节 满分 50 分） 第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 15 分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横 线上画一个沟（√） ；如有错误（每行只有一个错误） ，则按下列情况改正； 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线
上写出该词。并也用斜线划 掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ） ，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改 1 陕西 2006 Dear Anish, Here are the information about Manchester University. It is about 200 miles far away from London,and it has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school or near the school.They have all sorts of course. I’m sure you will find one you like it. I know you are particuiar interestes in Human Rights. So I will see that there is anything on their website(网址)。 I’ll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport When you arrived.You mat him a few years ago,but he Has changed a lot since them,Both your aunt or l ollk Forward to seeing you again. See you soon. Pat 76. 77. 78. 79. 80. 81. 82. 83.______ 84.______ 85.______
2 陕西 2007 Are the years you spent at school best years of you life? Personally, I found most lesson rather uninteresting. We had to 76． ____ 77． ____
sit at our desks in silence and paid attention to what the teachers were saying. They were used to write on the blackboard and ask us difficult questions. We also had to do plenty of homework, and hand it on time. We had to wear school uniforms and obey lots of rules. I left school as soon as I can and started work. I read books at the publie library, and late I decided to attend college. Now I really enjoy study because I’m growing old and know what I Want it. When I was at school. I was just the wrong age! 78． ____ 79． ____ 80． ____ 81． ____ 82． ____ 83． ____ 84． ____ 85． ____
3 陕西 2008 John Brown is a London taxi driver who love going to the theatre .Last week his mother gave him two tickets for a play. The tickets were on Sunday evening. Then John read some reviews of the play, which all said it was a terribly one! He wouldn’t go to see a play that no one liked it, So two hours before the play started, he left the ticket on the back seat of 76. loves 77. 78. 79. 80. 81. √ for terrible 去掉 it tickets to .
his taxi, Perhaps someone who wanted ∧ see the play would take them. 82. However, while John went back home, the tickets were still there. In the fact ,there were four tickets on the seat. Someone has placed another pair of tickets on top of them! 83. 84. 85. when
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4 陕西 2009 My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked ^ up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister 1. _______ 2. ________ 3. ________ 4. ________ 5.________
wanted ^ get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It w\asturned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, which for I just thought it was funny! 6._______ 7._______ 8.______ 9. _______ 10______
5 陕西 2010 Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor．I didn’t have my camera with me at that time，but I rushed back home to get ? ．Unfortunately，by the time I got back， they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere．I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out ? a building．He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him， but he signed his name on my shirt! 1______ 2______ 3_______ 4_______ 5_______ 6________ 7________ 8________ 9________ 10________
6 陕西 2011 Today is Sunday .I′ve been in Canada for two months . This is the first time that I′ve been away my family for such a long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I′ve soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised 76. 77. 78. 79. 80. 81. 82.
that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, we are planning a small party for the next Sunday. There ,Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been to China several times. I just can’t wait. 83. 84. 85.
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
2013 2013 年陕西高考英语试题 第二节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 15 分） 2013 年陕西卷高考英语试题及答案｜2013 高考陕西省英语试题和答案解析｜2013 年高考 陕西英语试卷答案 第二节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 15 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 My grandfather and I enjoy fishing. One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.