下面短文中共有 10 处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧） ，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
1、 （2011·浙江省诸暨中学高三12月月考） Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot. I was in great pain at that mom ent, but I tried to act as if nothing happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’t tell anyone and even refused the offer of help from my classmates. As the result, the hurt on my foot became worse. Now I know I am wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept their help. Someday we can help him in return. In this way, we can get along each other happily and peacefully. 2、 （2011· 浙江省温州市十校联合体高三上学期期末联考） On Children's Day last year, our city held an interested activity, in which children and their parents play the rich and the poor. In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious food, but the poor could only have breads with porridge(粥). Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. They hoped that their children could be taught the lesson from the dinner. Now many people on the earth don't have enough food and clothes. Every day only one half the world could enjoy enough food. The activity was held make the families understand the differences from the poor and the rich and also to make the parents know that too much material life won't always do good to the children.
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3、 （2011· 浙江省温州市高三上学期五校联考） A boy who was cleaning the shoes in the street said to a young man passed by,“Let me clean your boots. It just spends you only a penny.”But the man refused. Then the boy told him that he will clean his boots for nothing. The man agreed, and soon one of the boot shone brightly. Then he put the other boot on the box, and the boy refused to clean it if he was paid two pence for his work. The young man refused pay anything and went away. But the well-cleaning boot made the dirty one so bad that he could not walk on. He returned back and gave the boy two pence. 4、 （2011· 浙江省温州八校高三上学期期末联考） My car just wouldn’t move any farther. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided walk around a little before accepting I’d have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I found the small ho use standing in a field with a ligh t shone from the sitting room. I knocked at the door and was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the door but listened to my story carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasn’t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car. 5、 （2011· 浙江省嵊州二中高三 12 月月考试题） In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who lived in England, and decided to visit his married daughter in the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew Kennedy Airport. When he reached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughter’s address. Worse even, he discovered he can’t remember her family name too! Dr Fellows spent several hours at the airport tried to think what his daughter’s name was and where it was which she lived, but with much luck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he caught a next plane back to England. 6、 （2011· 浙江省宁波市八校高三联考） When Mr. and Mrs. Smith went to theatre, they left their German dog to guard his home. When two burglars broke into and the burglar alarm rang, the dog was waiting for them. Unfortunately, one of the burglars was dog-lover, and he quickly made friends with it. While the alarm was ringing, but the burglars were stealing cash and jewelry, worth over $10,000, from a safe, the dog laid down in his basket and went to sleep. When the police arrived at twenty minutes later, the burglars had gone. The dog was proud guarding the empty safe. When the first policeman entered into the room, it immediately attacked him, tearing his trousers and bit him in the leg.
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7、 （2011· 浙江省宁波市高三上学期期末试题） I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is my best friend. I find very convenient to go anywhere with a bike. Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure. I use my bike almost in summer when the weather is warm and dry. It can be very pleasant in winter when it is cold and rain is pour down. It can also be very dangerous. Of course I will be very carefully on my bike. In fact, accidents are not the only problem. Once I went to bookstore on my mother’s bike to buy some books and come out to find the bike missing. Now I have two strong lock. 8、 （2011· 浙江省杭州市萧山三校高三上学期期中联考） Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination. Should I choose a good major and a good university ? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested . It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. Ho wever, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion , the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best. 9、 （2011· 浙江省杭州市高级中学高三上学期第三次月考） It would be difficult to imagine modern life with the telephone. It has become an useful instrument of communication, save much time and travel b y enabling people to talk one another over great distances. Nowadays it is so easy to talk cross a continent or even overseas as it is to talk to one's next-door neighbor. Therefore, it is in emergencies which the telephone really proves its usefulness. When there is a fire , and when someone is s uddenly ill , the first thing one thinks of it is " Where is the nearest telephone?"
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10、 （2011· 浙江省杭州二中高三 11 月月考试题） Dear Abby , How are you? Today I’ve got wonderful news to tell you. I has been offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. One hundred and twenty student took exams for it, but only few were chosen and I was one of them. However, my parents don’t subscribe it. They strongly against me going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year. Besides, they are afraid of that I will feel lonely. They can't imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I can be able to continue living with them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up? Best Wishes! Jane 11、 （2011· 浙江省杭州二中高三 10 月月考试题） Looking at the map of the world, and we can see that three quarters of the earth are covered by water. However, we are short of water, it sounds strange to you. But it is true. You see, 97% of the total water in the world is sea water, which is so salt that man can drink it. So only 3% of the water can be drunk or used for man. And the drinkable water comes from rivers, lakes and underground. Man even can’t use them completely, because the water contains icebergs and glaciers. All what is the worst is that water in some parts has been polluted or is being polluted. How can we drink? So something must be done to protect water from polluted.
12、 （2011· 浙江省 2011 届高三第一次五校联考试题） More than one American child dislike getting advice from members of their family. They turn to “strangers”. While they need advice, they don’t usually go to people they know. Instead many of them wrote letters to newspapers and magazine that give advice on many different subjects included family problems, the use of language, health, cooking, child care, clothes, and even on how to buy a house or a car. Most newspapers regular print letters from readers with problems. Along with letters there are answers written by people who are supposed to know what to solve such problems. Some of these writers are doctors, others are lawyers and educators. But two of the most famous writers of advice are women who without special training for this kind of work.
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13.【河北省易县第二高级中学 2013 三模】 One day, I got a full mark in maths exam and only got 50 marks in the Chinese exam．On my way home, I was in low spirits． When I arrived at home, my mother kissed me on the cheek as soon as she knew the result of maths and said she would bring me to have a nice meal in KFC as the praise． Seen her so happy， I quick took out of my Chinese exam paper．But quite contrary to her behavior just now, he slapped me on my face heavily．At that moment, I couldn’t help cry． I understood my mother cared much for my scores than me and I felt sad．But as matter of fact, I needed my mother’s help when I have difficulty with my study rather than her slaps．
14. 【贵阳市 2013 高考英语】 Once l waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minute, no bus came.I couldn't wait any longer but decided to walk to school. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute,1 would have caught. If l wanted to take to the next bus,1 would have to wait for another 30 minutes. Only then did I realized the importance of patience. Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made. Patient also plays the important part in our study and work, With it we can achieve greater. Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, we will think of the experience of wait for a bus.
15 Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour, we passed over a car. It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road. My friend slows down, and pulled behind the other car. He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn’t so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself. I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing, but I won’t forget his good nature or character.
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16 Dear Brad, I’m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don’t think love built on house and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last. As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future. Li Hua
17 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, Some of us are having problems about our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are comfortable about it, but it is no need to feel too sadly. Our parents are checking in our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into troubles. They have probably heard of some horrible stories about other kids and thinking we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as many as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lie around --- they are bound to read it. Thank you!
18 We spend two weeks in London last year. We went there in the autumn .We think it is the best season to visit England. The weather is usually good but there aren’t too many tourists in October. We stayed in a small hotel in the West End .It was convenient as we did most of our traveling by foot. We went to look at the places where all tourists see. We saw Buckingham Palace and the National Gallery. We went to shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money .What we liked most, though, was going to theatre. We don’t have the chance to see so wonderful plays at home .A lot of people
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say English food is very badly. We didn’t think so. It’s true that most of the restaurants are French or Italian or Chinese, but we had some very good meal. 19 Tom is a senior two students who devotes himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several courses. In the evening, he studies at home until deep into the night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work effectively. In Sunday morning, Tom was about to study when his father came up and advised him to have break. Soon they had a good idea. They bought a kite which they liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs where Tom enjoyed fly the kite himself. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Tom was energetic and actively in class. He said it was only why he had a better weekend.
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