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高考英语书面表达突破一
高考范文赏析导学案
(2014 年 4 月 18 日)
王成旺

宁远一中高三英语备课组

一、近几年湖南高考书面表达的命题特点: 试 卷 命题形式 看图 汉语提示 英语单词提示 体裁 短文 记述短文 记述短文 题材 大海、森林和社会间的关系;团 结、合作、积少成多 自己或他人物品失而复

得的经历 自己或他人一次比赛的经历,写 出自己的感受

2011 年 2012 年 2013 年

二、写作要求 1. 内容要点的完整性(完全、较完全、基本完成、没有完成) 2. 词汇运用的准确性(高级词汇的运用) 3. 语言的得体性 (复杂多变的句式) 4. 上下文的连贯性 (合理连接词的运用) 5. 字数及书写 (不少于 120 个) :三、2013 年湖南高考书面表达真题 请以下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。 match winner loser result

内容: 1.自己或他人的一次经历; 2. 你的感受。 注意: 1. 词数不少于 120 个; 2. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名称。 四、书面表达评分实例 I The volleyball match It is so exciting that day! There is a volleyball match between our class and neighbor class last some day. Tha match began at 5:00. We all people always watching to end and said “ fighting, fighting” for our class. Our class then more fighting. It’s spent sbout one a hour and a half and the match ended. Finally, our class was fail so the neighbor class was winner. Our class was loser. However, our class is wonderful. I think it is the best. We try our best. 分析:

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给分: 书面表达评分实例 II Several years ago, when I was a middle school student, I took part in a sports meeting. A ping-pong ball match let me unforgetful. In fact, in my class my ping-pong ball skill is excellent, so I was asked to join the ping-pong ball match. Although I wasn’t attended big even earlier, I was nervous. To my worries, class 2 also had my competitor. He also was good at ping=pong ball either. The game was starting. In the first competition, I losed. In the second competition, I decided try my best to played ball. Though the first fail disappointed me, I wined in the second round. But in the final round, I losed again. The result is terrible. I was upset. I became the loser again. My competitor is the winner. I think my classmates would scold me, but they didn’t. They even encourage me. Whatever, winning isn’t so important if some people are always and encourage you. 分析:

给分:

书面表达评分实例 III Many memories faded away. However, never will I forget the sports meeting on a hot Friday morning, which has encouraged me a lot in my life afterwards. Having prepared for such a long time, we, all of the students in my class, were sure that we would win the basketball match undoubtedly. Far beyond our expectation, our captain, who played a vital role in the match, had his arm hurt when the basketball was approaching. How terrible it was! But all of us, went all out to perform the role and tried to make up for the disadvantage we were faced with. Eventually, we lost the game by one score. Every one there thought we would be a potential winner. We became silent at that moment. Our captain, feeling great sorry for the result, even burst into tears. Seeing this, our head-teacher, Mr. Mao, comforted us softly, adding, “ Nothing is more important than friendship and your sense of teamwork. Success still belongs to you. ” I was deeply touched by what he said, believing that winning isn’t everything. Instead, I should always enjoy the process of a match and treasure everyone standing by me. 分析: 给分: 五、优秀文章的条件: 一) 、使用高级词汇
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二) 、有效连接手段 三) 、使用复杂多变的句式结构: 1. 从句 2. 非谓语 3 独立结构

4 强调 5 倒装

6 感叹句

7 虚拟语气

六、请找出文章中的高级词汇、复杂多变的句式结构以及连接词。 1. 高级词汇:

2. 复杂多变的句式结构:

3. 连接词:

七、2013 年湖南高考英语书面表达优秀范文欣赏(1---5 篇) (一) Whenever I looked back on my experience in an 800-metre race, I can’t help thinking of Lisa, who gave up the first prize just to help me out of trouble. It happened in our school sports meeting. Lisa and I were chosen to take part in the 800-metre match on behalf of our class. Though we practiced running every day together, she was always quicker than me. Thus, there was no doubt that she was expected to be the winner. During the match, she was always the first one and it seemed that she would keep the first. All of a sudden, a guy tripped me over. Feeling painful, I shouted loudly. At that time, Lisa was five metres from the end, but on hearing my shouting, she turned back to me without hesitation. Finally we walked to the end together. Apparently, we were both losers in the match. But we were winners in everyone’s heart. Words can’t express my gratitude to Lisa and I know she is my friend, who nobody can be compared with. “ Friendship is more important than being just a winner,” she said. (二) What is really important to us gaining from competition, like a match, a game, or a race, is not its result, but the experience and lessons. Several days ago, our school held an English Speech contest, which I was interested in and joined in it. I was so hopeful to win it that I was too nervous to speak it fluently. I didn’t achieve the award. I became a loser. To my surprise, Li Hua, who is the winner of this contest, came to my home and encouraged me a lot. His words made me so touched. I appreciated this friendship. There is nothing more important than friendship and experience I have learned from the contest, with which my future life will be more valuable and meaningful. Afterwards, I was aware of my weakness. I should enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizons. Whatever the result is, the process is important. (三) Everyone must have experienced success and failure during their life and we
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all expect the best result. Sometimes, we are winners, but sometimes we may be losers. Now I can still remember the experience which has taught me a lot. That was a sunny day, In our yard, my brother and I were playing football. He was only seven years old felt hard to play football with me because he’s shorter than me. But he insisted on practicing He even asked for a match between us. Then we began. During the match, he played it so hard that he almost fell over a branch. Finally, he lost the match. “ How about another match tomorrow? ” he asked me. “ But you can’t win the match, ” I said. He smiled and said, “ I enjoy playing football with you really. What fun it is! ” I was touched by his words. Now I come to realize that process is more important than results. We sometimes hope for the best result, but do remember to enjoy the match itself whether you are a winner or a loser. (四) Whether you are a loser or a winner never depends on the result of a match. As long as you fight for it with your efforts, you are a hero indeed. That is what Wang Hao taught me, who is more than a champion in my heart. As we all know, it’s disappointing that Wang missed the gold medal three times. I still remember when Wang played against Zhang Jike in2012. Even when Wang was behind Zhang, he still spared no efforts to finish the match. Faced with the failure, Wang smiled instead of complaining about it. Through Wang’s experience, I know the real meaning of being a winner. Victory is not about how to win a match, but about struggling for it and never giving up. Every one can be a winner if you keep moving. (五) I’ll never forget that afternoon, when we class 4 held a basketball against class 3. At that time, the sun shone brightly with every player’s face covered with a smile of confidence. After we cheered up each other, the match began. Forty minutes later, the match got into a tense situation. The score is 28 to 28. The coach stood there calmly and gave us a gesture of victory. Soon we realize we should cooperate to win the match. We threw the ball to each other properly and one teammate got it into the basketball at the last second. We were winner. Tired as we were, we felt proud. Through the match, I learn that cooperation is very important whatever you are doing. Teammate plays great role in the work. Whether a winner or a loser, you can learn a lot so long as you cooperate with others and enjoy the process. That’s enough.
八、总 结 建 议

1. 2. 3. 4.

切中题意,不漏要点, 卷面整洁; 语言得体、准确、连贯、多样; 积累“语言经验”, 培养“语言意识”; 观察品味,模仿训练;

九、作业布置:课后请赏析 2012 年湖南高考书面表达范文若干篇。

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