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高中英语作文写作——如何写建议信(简洁版)


高考复习专题
建议信

写作要点: 1.建议信:作者就有关问题进行分析并针对 这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。 2. 对象: 1)写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己 的看法和观点; 2)写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。

书信格式
称呼(Greeting):收信人的称呼,顶格写在信纸的左 边。 ?

正文(Body):信的内容,低于称呼语,常在缩进四、 五个字母处起笔。正文通常分为三个部分; 引言部分---表明写信的目的;

主体部分---具体说明写信人的请求或想法;

结束部分---总结信的内容,表明希望对方做些什么;或写 出祝愿话语。如果是写回信,在引言部分要提到来信内
容,然后再写其他内容。

结束词(Closing):发信人表示自己对收信人的一种客 套称呼,写在书信正文结尾下面低一或两行的位置上。 一般它均从正中或偏右处写起。收信人与写信人之间是 朋友关系时常用: Yours,/Your sincerely,/Your truly,

建议信篇章结构

⑴ 说明建议的内容; ⑵ 提出具体建议的原因; ⑶ 指出采纳建议的益处。 注意事项:语言要委婉、礼貌,顾 及对方感受。

3. 基本框架:
开头(beginning)---- 开门见山,向对方陈 述自己的观点.(state your idea) 主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说 明理由,接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)

结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头,重申观点(restate your opinion.)

4. 注意事项:

1)建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出 建议的理由,提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要 礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、 具有合理性和说服力; 2)建议的角度要多样化,避免重复。可从政治、 经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建 议; 3)符合英文信件的基本格式; 4)基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。

常用套语
A.建议信开头常用句式
to know that … 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter 4. I am writing to you for the purpose of …
(照应材料,表明写作意图)

1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry

5. I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you.
6. You have asked me for some advice with regard to … and I will try to make some conductive suggestions. 7. You have asked me for my advice about/on …

B. 表达建议(body)
1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 2. I would like to suggest/recommend that… 3. If I were you, I would… 4. Why not …?/ How (What) about doing … First,/Firstly,/ Secondly,/ Then,/ After 5. …is a In good/great idea. Finally, /Meanwhile, that,/ the end,/ 6. You may more,/ consider doing … /What’s 7. It would seem/seems to me Furthermore, that you could …… In addition,/ Besides,/ 8. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 9. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should…

C.建议信结尾常用句式
1. I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration.

2. I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/
recommendations practical/ useful/ helpful. 3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider

my suggestions.
5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 6. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.

适当运用模 板

模板二:

Dear _____(对象),
I am writing to express my views concerning

______(问题).
First and for the most, _______(建议一). In

addition, _____(建议二). What’s more _____(建议三).
I hope you’ll find these proposals useful.

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Dear Bob, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to , I suggest (有时根据需要 具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建 议). I'm sure (预测可能的结果,给对 方以行动的信心和决心). I'm looking forward to (表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua

Dear____, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _____, and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _____. I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you / your ______(祝愿). Yours sincerely Li Ming

第一步:审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的,但 审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例,谈谈如何审题: 思考的问题 第几人称?(person) 文章的题材是什么? 样题分析 第一人称 一封信
通拥挤的状况

要写的文章主题是什么 (topic) 建议政府采取措施舒缓交

怎样安排信息点的顺序? (order) 动作是什么时候发生的?(时态) (when)

说理逻辑性 一般现在时



Step 1 List the key points



Step 2 Make sentences




Step3. Form a passage and polish

假设你是李华,你的笔友张明来信说他英 语学的不大好,请你给他写一封回信,提 一些建议,帮助他学好英语。
内容提示:1. 一定要做好课前预习

2. 课堂上认真听讲,记好笔记
3. 课后认真独立完成作业

4. 每天进行英语听说练习
5. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量

第一步:列举要点 ? 英语学的不大好 You are not good at English You don’t do well in English You have difficulty in English

You are not getting along well with English

做好课前预习 Look through preview Prepare/ make preparations for 课堂上认真听讲 Listen to the teacher carefully

Pay attention to what the teacher says carefully
记好笔记 Set / write down

Make/take notes

课后认真独立完成作业 Finish your homework by yourself/ on your own/don’t copy 每天进行英语听说练习

Practise listening and speaking every day
加强课外阅读扩大词汇量 Enrich/enlarge your vocabulary.

点睛之笔:
? Nothing is impossible to a willing heart! ? Practice makes perfect ? Never give up/lose heart ? If you have any trouble, please turn to me for help. ? I’d like to share my methods with you. ? Only in this way, can you learn English well ? read novels, magazines and everything to do with English

书面表达训练

2008年全国卷II英语作文 假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信 向你咨询如何才能学好中文,请你根据下 列要点写回信。 要点: 1. 参加中文学习班; 2. 看中文书刊、电视; 3. 学唱中文歌曲; 4. 交中国朋友。 注意1.词数100左右;2. 开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try and write me in Chinese next time. Best wishes Li Hua

Dear Bob, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to , I suggest (有时根据需要 具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建 议). I'm sure (预测可能的结果,给对 方以行动的信心和决心). I'm looking forward to (表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua


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