开头 １.陈述现象引出主题： With the development of science and technology... With the acceleration of economic growth... As the pace of economic growth has been accelerating in recent years,... As the co
nsumer cornucopia has been developing in recent years, a lot of tourism attractions witness a great increase in the vacationers. Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern. Recently, ...has been becoming more and more popular among students. Recently, ...has been gaining its popularity among.. The problem of.. has never escaped people's attention. Pollutions has always been a live issue. Nowadays, overpopulation has become a problem we have to face. Recently we did a survey among college students about..... ２.现象在其他人身上引起的结果： 其他人做了什么事 Seeing this trend, sb.do sth. To deal with this problem,... sb. do sth. 其他人怎麽认为／列举别人的观点 注： 如果写在第一段就一句概括 如果作文题目要求专 门描述别人的观点 就要另起一段 It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that… Many people insist that… A lot of people seem to think that… People’s views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… . However, others believe that… People may have different opinions on… Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure)
３.现象在你身上引起的结果 我打算怎麽做／ 我怎么认为 注意用连词或连词短语引出你的行为或观点 如果跟别人观 点不同，就用转折连词 如：but/ however 我打算做什么： And I'm going to / I want to../ I'd like to What I'm going to do is.../ What I want to do is... 我怎么认为/引出自己的观点
In my opinion,.. As far as I'm concerned,.. From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second. I entirely agree with the idea that… Personally, I think/believe that… As the consumer cornucopia has been developing in recent years, a lot of tourism attractions witness a great increase in the vacationers. Seeing this trend, the historical tourism sites begin to charge higher entry fees during the peak seasons, which results in massive complaints. In spite of all those condemning voices, I still consider it necessary to adopt higher ticket prices. 2.中间段 分层次连接词： 列举理由： There are a number of reasons. First/firstly, … Second/secondly, … Third/thirdly,.. What's more,.. The reasons are chiefly as follows. First/firstly,.. Second/secondly,...Third/thirdly,.. What's more,... Why did… ? For one thing… For another…. On one hand, ..on the other hand,.. To begin with.../ to start with.../ first of all,../ ...last but not the least,/ above all,.. 列举建议 Here are some suggestions: first,...Only in this way can we…Second,.. Third,.. 3.结尾段 论述型结尾： Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that… Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that… All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. 评价/建议型结尾 It must be realized that every coin has two sides. Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that .. No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that… It is high time that we put an end to the it..
过渡词 陈述 apparently, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, obviously, clearly, naturally, evidently, commonly, occasionally,...
转折 but yet however nevertheless whereas instead 让步 although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, 原因 for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to. 结果 as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, 总结 on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short. .. 表示好处 1)It has many advantages. / It is of great benefit. 2)It does us a lot of good. /It benefits us quite a lot. 3)It is beneficial to us. 表示坏处 1)It has more disadvantages. / It is of many disadvantages. 2)2)It does us much harm. / It harms us quite a lot. 3)3)It is harmful to us. 表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 1)It is important(necessary，difficult，convenient， possible)for sb.to do sth. 2)We think it necessary to do sth. 3)It plays an important role in our life. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 语法正确 层次清晰 语言表达（三句式。观点一句 2 句陈述） 内容：how what why 选角度 逻辑严密 书写整齐规范