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The Beauty of Writing

Why is writing so tough?
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高考作文高分卷的特点

外在美:第一印象很重要!书写清 楚,字母匀称,词、行间距适当, 卷面整洁。 ? 结构美:有合理的段落层次,多为 3段式,条理清晰;每段有每

段的 主题。
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词汇美:词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少, 也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。 like→be fond of,be addicted to/ help→do sb a favor 句式美:运用得当的高级句式结构可以 给文章增色不少,从而使整篇文章因此 而生辉 。 衔接美:使用恰当的连接词,对写一篇 有“英语味”的文章很重要,能使文章 上下衔接自然、条理清晰。

你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛, 就“是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为8小时” 这一论题进行辩论,请你作为正方代表,写 一份发言稿,内容要点如下:1.保证充足睡 眠 2. 提高学习效率 3. 增加自主学习时间 注意: 1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯 3. 辩论稿的开头已为你写好 (不计入总词数)。 As a senior high student, I strongly recommend that

语法篇

这第一句写的…

I strongly recommend that This is right we as a senior high student….

I strongly recommend that should shorten school time into eight hours.

你再看这开头……

I strongly recommend that the time students devoted to studying in school should be reduced to eight hours a day. The main reasons accounting for it are as follows.

这动词错的…

Short student’s time in school can have a good effect on study, it can important for student’s study xiaolu, and increase student’s own time.

原来改书面表达就是 改错……

In my opinion, we must have enough time to study, but we also should keep enough time to relax and sleep, either of them are important. Because of we have time to relax, we can study energetic. Reduce study time also can improve the quality of our school life.

这词汇…

你再看这词汇…

欣赏一下这篇文 章的句式结构…

If equal amount of work have to be accomplished with a declined school time, study efficiently is expected to be enhanced. Moreover, extracurricular time will make up more of the students’ schedule. That is to say, chances are we can make a better use of our time.

卷面篇

养眼的…

当批到下午两点看 到了它们…

老师最恨的作文…

老师最喜欢的作文…

一点提示…

好练的字





过长

答题不可越界

作文五档:( 从教师阅卷印象角度划分)

(21—25分) ? 有模有样 (16—20分) ? 马马虎虎 (11—15分) ? 稀里糊涂 (6—10分) ? 一塌糊涂 (0—5分)
? 漂漂亮亮

Three Rules:
1.You learn to write by writing. ? 2. There is no good writing; only good rewriting. ? 3. When in doubt, refer to Rule No. 1 and 2.
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Five Steps:
? Analyze

the writing task. ? Organize it. ? Draft. ? Revise. ? Edit.

高考英语写作中怎样使用复杂结构

怎样运用复杂结构:
1.适当的语态 2.使用不定式

3.使用过去分词
4.使用V.+ing形式 5.使用名词性从句 6.使用定语从句 7.使用虚拟语气 8.使用倒装句,感叹句

怎样运用复杂结构:
1.主动转被动
People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般)

that the conference be put off. It is suggested
级)
We expect the advisor to work 4 hours a week .

(高

The advisor is expected to work 4 hours a week .

2. 使用不定式
In order to earn money by myself and broaden my horizons , I intend to look for a part-time job as a salesman. (为了独立赚钱和拓宽视野)

3. 使用过去分词
She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般)

Followed by many students , she walked out of the room . (高级)

4. 使用v-ing形式
1)Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般)

Now our School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils.

伴随状语

2) Weather permitting, I’ll visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation.(天气允许的话)

5. 使用名词性从句
1.I am sorry. I didn’t reply without delay.

I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.
2. What is the most importantI is can that

help children improve their English.( 最为重 要的是)

6. 使用定语从句
1)The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般)

The girl whose composition was well was written highly spoken of. (高级)
2)maybe

I will work as a volunteer for a school as a teaching assistant__________.(这将丰富我 的生活)

which is able to enrich my life. enriching my life.

which will make my life colorful.

7. 使用虚拟语气 我相信如果你是我,你也会做出同样的 选择。

I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.

8. 使用倒装句、感叹句 1. How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. (我多么希望)
2. not only… but also…引起的倒装 Not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. (我不仅能独立赚钱)

高考英语写作中要学会使用恰当的关联词

III.常用的连接词
1. 表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容 另外,还有:what’s more; besides;
also; moreover; in addition

2. 表示转折关系
但是, 然而, 相反:but; however; yet;

instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.

3. 表示因果关系

as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示条件关系
如果,只要: if ;on condition ( that );

因为,因此,所以: since;

as long as 除非: unless 否则: or else

5. 表示时间关系
当… 的时候 : when ; while 在…之后: after 在…之前: before 直到: until 直到?才?: not……until…… 一…就… : as soon as 后来, 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近来: lately; recently 自从… :since 从那时起: from then on

6. 表示特定的顺序关系
首先:firstly 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end

7. 换一种方法表述
换句话说: in other words;

that is to say;

8. 进行举例说明
例如,比如: for instance; for example;

like; such as that is to say, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, for this reason

9. 用于陈述事实
实际上: in fact; actually;

as a matter of fact 跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth

10. 对一个话题进行总结
总而言之,总的来说:

on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word, finally, in conclusion, generally speaking, as you know, in the end , 11. 其它常用到的副词 therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ;Thus ; namely ; although ; afterwards ; personally;

12. 表示结果: thus, therefore, so, as a
result, seeing that, luckily, unfortunately

13. 表示强调: above all, indeed, surely,
certainly, of course, after all, without any delay, at least, at most , most important, undoubtedly

背诵一些题材的常识性语句

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