样例 5 试题： 请简要描述图片内容，并联系生活实际谈谈你的感想。 Such times we live in! Why would you catch mice when we are given fish? 2013 届上海英语一模 浦东新区
After watching the picture myself, I can’t help but look down upon the cat who says that “such time we live in! Why would you catch mice when we are given fish?” It reminds me of China’s current situation. Nowadays, China’s rising in a speed that has never been before. But that doesn’t mean that we could sit and enjoy the fruits of China’s rise. 5 Under no circumstances could we indulge ourselves into the present life which seems to be wonderful without thinking that there may be potential danger hidden somewhere around us. If we didn’t realize it, we will gradually leave the basic skills we already have behind. In this way, when someday there does come emergency, we will lose the power to face and defeat it. In conclusion, we need to be prepared whether it is good or bad. (141 words) Composition B The picture generally describes a family of cats, who are enjoying their dinner which is fish. When one of the cats is trying to catch a mouse when given fish, another cat flattered him by saying that “why catching mice when given fish?” In my opinion, the cat is wrong, definitely! In our study, for example, we always get help 5 from our classmates, sometimes in exams. We take it for granted that whenever we are stuck in trouble, there’s gonna be someone ready to help, we are wrong, like the cat. There is not someone like Lei Feng who is always ready to help others in this century. If we rely too much on others’ help, one day when we don’t get it and we do not have the skill to do it ourselves, we are dead!
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I want to say to the cat: you may laugh at the cat who chases the mice, but one day you’ll be 10 laughed at when you lose the skill to catch mice yourselves. Always remember: He who laughs last laughs best. (178 words) Composition C The comic strip show a funny story happened between several cats. While one of the cats is catching mice when fed with fish, another cat asked why he did so when given fish. It catches my eye that it never occurred to the cat that one day they had to leave home and fed themselves. In other words, parents will pass away one day and at that time those cats will have no 5 choice but to live on their own two feet. But if they don’t learn the skills that are required for survival, they will fail to be independent. It is an alarm for all the teenagers about my age, some of which are living in paradise with their mom handling housework and father chores. They refuse to do anything as long as they’re done by someone else. They fail to understand the importance of “practical skills”. When they 10 cannot find anyone to look to, they will regret what they’ve done now. (163 words) Composition D We can see from the picture that a cat doubts another cat’s behavior of catching mice when given fish. As far as I’m concerned, his behavior is quite understandable. Our learning experience can account for this. Some of the students are not satisfied with the school life for it teaches a student with nothing 5 but knowledge. Thus, they focus on finding part-time jobs and skip classes from time to time, just like the cat who catches mice in the picture. As far as I’m concerned, it’s no need. As long as we are given knowledge (“the fish”), we should focus on it as long as it will contribute to our future life. If we are distracted from it and pay too much attention to practical experience, we forget that certificate does count in most cases. 10 In this sense, we need to first finish our main job first before we decide to do other things. (154 words) Composition E It can be seen from the picture that the third cat from the left is questioning whether it is a must to chase a mouse or not when we are given fish. In my opinion, there is definitely a need to do so. It echoes with what military training is trying to teach students to do. During high school and 5 college time, it is required in the curriculum that each individual should take part in the military training in order to graduate from the school and most students feel it disgusting to bear. But actually, we need not only knowledge but also real-life experience & technique which can be learned from social activity like military training and volunteer works. We may fail to feel that these things are of great importance until we are faced with enormous difficulties or challenges 10 one day.
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Just like the cats who are given fish, we may fail to understand the brilliance of the cat who chases mice. But only when we have to catch fish ourselves will we understand the importance of it. (179 words) Composition F The cat in the picture is questioning another cat the reason why the cat is chasing the mice at dinner. Likewise, many modern people are questioning whether it is needed to teach citizens the escape skills when we’re lived in a safe place. Or are we? 5 I think we still remember the big fire occurred in 2010 at Jiaozhou Rd, which took away nearly 100 people’s life. Only afterwards do we begin to realize the importance of escape skills. It alarms us that there is a strong possibility that we may be stuck in such a condition one day. And if we don’t pick up these skills beforehand, we may fail to survive. And I’m serious. From this, we may conclude that it’s better that we figure out the importance of certain skills 10 before certain disasters happened to us later on. If we take the cat who laughs at another one as an example, we may have a sad ending just like him! (163 words)
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