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A letter of giving advice

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Dear Li Ming, It is a great chance to visit England. Just take the following points into account and you will find your vac

ation comfortable. Firstly, you should adapt yourself to the basic rules of British traffic, such as driving and walking on the left. Besides, you’d better get into the habit of bringing an umbrella when going out as the weather there is changeable. Second , please keep quiet even in public places like supermarkets because noise is offensive there. Also, remember to keep some distance when talking with British People since they don’t like to be too close to others. Third, every time you are going to see a doctor or visit a friend you’d better make an appointment ahead of time. By the way, it is good thing to bring a small gift. Last but not least, it is very impolite to ask questions bout one’s privacy, which will easily cause misunderstanding. Have a good time and I hope you find my suggestions helpful. Yours 观察与思考: 格式, 对象, Jack Darwin

内容,时态 .

一封(回复)信 格式:__________________ 个人或组织 对象:__________________ 提建议 内容:__________________ 一般现在时,一般将来时 时态:__________________

建议信一般为三段: para1. 介绍相关,表明目的 para 2. 具体建议以及理由 para3. 表示感谢,希望采纳
讨论:与询问信三步走的异同?

开头常用句式( para.1)
1. I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on…../From your letter, I’m sorry to learn that ….I think you can make it if you follow the advice below. 2. You have asked for some advice about…and I will try to give you my suggestions. 3. As is known to all, there is a tendency (phenomenon) that … and its bad influence (effect;) can not be ignored any longer. Here are some tips/suggestions that may be helpful to solve the problem.

结尾常用句式 (para.3)
1.Thank you for reading my letter. Thank you for your time and attention. 2. I do hope that these suggestions / proposals/ recommendations will be helpful./useful/ beneficial. =I do hope you will find my suggestions helpful/ useful/beneficial. 3. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration(account).

提建议常用句式(para.2)
It is important/ necessary/vital to do/ that … It should be a good idea to do… It will help to do … It is time that sb. should do … It is ….that matters. You had better (not) do = you may as well (not) do You are supposed to do .. You will find it helpful/ useful to do sth. Doing sth. can make a great difference . Not only...but also … Only if….will you …

常用连词
首先: first; firstly; at first; first of all ;above all ; to begin with; to start with; for one thing ; on the one hand; in the first place 然后: second; secondly ; also; next; besides; more over; what’s more; furthermore; in addition; additionally; for another; on the other hand 最后: finally; lastly ; eventually at last ;in the end; last but not least

建议信的常见话题: How to learn English/Chinese well How to learn efficiently How to make full use of time How to balance study and life How to be a good team member How to make friends How to communicate with parents How to solve the environment pollution/the traffic jam/the food safety problem How to reduce waste on campus How to improve the service of a hotel How to make a trip comfortable

近年来大城市交通拥堵严重,影响了人们的生活和经济发 展,对此人们十分抱怨.假如你是李华,请根据以下要点用英 语给报社写封信. 1. 交通现状及影响; 2. 提出改进建议; 3. 希望建议被采纳. 注意事项:1. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 2. 开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。

【写作要求】1.建议信必须包括所给要点,但不要逐条翻译。
2. 词数:100左右。

1. 交通现状及影响;
Nowadays, people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced people’s daily life and economic development.

2. 提出改进建议

More streets and roads should be built. The number of bikes and cars can be limited. The number of private cars should be put under control. Buses should have their own special routes. Underground train and city train should be developed quickly.
3. 希望建议被采纳

Thank you for reading my letter and I do hope my advice will be helpful.

Dear Editor, I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. Nowadays, people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced people’s daily life and economic development. Here is some advice that may be helpful to solve the problem. For one thing, more streets and roads should be built. In this way, we can speed up the flow of buses and cars. For another, the number of bikes and cars can be limited, which can decrease the traffic flow. But the most important thing is that the number of private cars should be put under control. Meanwhile, buses should have their own special routes which can’t be used by other vehicles. In addition, underground train and city train should be developed quickly. Thank you for reading my letter and I do hope my advice will be helpful. Yours, Li Hua

Practice makes perfect:
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter 来信向你咨询如 何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点些回信。 要点:(1)参加中文学习班; (2)看中文书刊,电视; (3)学唱英文歌 (4)交中国朋友。 注意:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 100词左右.

Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then it also helps to watch TV and read books, new spapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, you can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about china and help you learn Chinese. I hope that my suggestions will be helpful to you . Try writing to me in Chinese next time. Yours, Li Hua


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