姓名：蔡同学 学校：汕头市第二中学 分数：73
Michael Phelps, an extraordinary American swimmer, who was born on June 30th in 1985 in the Baltimore, Maryla in America, started to swi
m at the age of 7, later he experienced a lot of hard training. When he was 15 years old, MP not only took part in the 2000 Olympic Games but also won the fifth prize. It’s reported that he was the youngest man since 1932 the first Olympics. What’s more, MP achieved his dream about gaining 8 medals in Beijing Olympic Game, which broke 7 world records and created the history. Having read MP’s story, I feel so inspired that I think of a saying -- “No pain no gain”, certainly we students should confront some difficulties in our school life bravely.
【评语】 在运用从句，非谓语动词的同时，可以留意到句子结构的正确性，即有且只有一 个谓语动词，这点很重要，运用技巧必须基于正确句子结构之上。