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对比论点作文
框架第一篇
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should wri

te at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1、 有人做好事期望得到回报; 2、 有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报; 3、 我的观点。 A great many people presume upon a reward when doing a good deed. First and foremost, there is a natural tendency to equate doing good deeds with a certain amount of reward, and reward with a certain amount of money. What is more, they maintain that since the basis of contemporary society is money, one of the major means of earning money is getting reward by doing good deeds.(缺乏背景描述句) On the contrary, the vast majority of people assume that doing a good deed should be based on people’s personal consciousness. Hence, doing a good deed is fulfilling itself and reward is of minimal significance. Numerous examples can be given, but this will suffice.
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Mr. Lei Feng lived a simple life dedicated to doing good deeds without expecting any reward and helping people from all walks of life, yet he was remembered as one of the most successful hero of our time. Generally speaking, it is my view that we should not expect a reward when doing a good deed. Since we do this for enjoyment, self-fulfillment and spiritual enhancement, not for the purpose of reward.(缺乏升华主题句, It is high time that…)

框架第二篇
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Importance of a Name. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1 有人认为名字很重要 2 也有人认为无关紧要, 3 我认为 Recently, it is universally acknowledged that due attention has to be paid to the importance of name. To begin with, a large number of people assert that one’s name can exert profound influence on the success of a person or institution. In addition, some even maintain that the mental health and physical fitness of a person will
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be influenced or even determined by his or her name.(缺乏背景描 述句)

On the contrary, it is the view of a great many people that
one’s name is of little significance. They can think of no better illustration than the following ones. “Qiu”, which means “hill”, is the name of Confucius, the greatest thinker, philosopher and educator throughout history. Likewise, another case in point is Lao Zi, the founder of philosophical and religious Taoism, whose name is “er”, which means “the ear”. These examples effectively clarify that one’s future is only determined by his striving spirit, talent or intelligence rather than some mysterious and superstitious factors such as certain names or lucky numbers. As for me, significance should be attached to intelligence, persistence and diligence instead of one’s name. Given all the above arguments, it is high time that we put an end to this undesirable phenomenon.(适用于一方有明显的错误)

对比论点框架结构
第一段:1. 背景描述句 (从句套从句) 2. A 论点提出句 (be in favor of… / prefer to… ) 3. A 论据提出句(一) (与论点因果关系) 4. A 论据提出句(二) (并列或递进关系)
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第二段:5. 承上启下句+B 论点提出句(让步状语从句倒装) 6. B 论据提出句(一) (与论点因果关系) 7. B 论据提出句(一) (并列或递进关系) 第三段:8. 自身论点提出句(As far as I am concerned,… ) 9. 自身论点支持句(与论点因果关系) 10. 总结句(Given all the above arguments,…)

赏析第三篇
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on University Ranking. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1. 目前高校排名相当盛行 2. 对这种做法人们看法不一 3. 我认为……

There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailing trend for some individuals or organizations to rank universities. To this phenomenon people’s attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view. They claim that ranking universities can help high school graduates or their parents to make a sound choice when enrolling in a university or college. Besides, this practice can help
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promote the level of higher education as a whole in that many universities will exert efforts to elevate their position.

Others, however, hold the opposite view. They point
out that the result of ranking is not always credible, for many individuals or institutions do it merely for the purpose of colleting money. Furthermore, some universities overemphasize the result of ranking and waste large amounts of resources. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the second view. We should not go to extremes. For one thing, it must be admitted that ranking is an effective means to encourage universities or colleges to compete with each other and improve their work. For another, it should not be conducted and used in the wrong way. What mentioned above shows that we put an end to university ranking.

仿写第四篇
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1. 家长送学生参加各种艺术班 2. 有人支持,有人反对
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3. 作为大学生,我的观点

There is a growing tendency nowadays for parents to send their children to register and attend a great variety of arts courses, such as dancing, calligraphy and musical instruments training, etc. The attitudes of people towards this phenomenon vary from person to person. Some people maintain that these extra curriculums are of great necessity and benefits to students. According to a recent survey on pre-school intelligence level, the respondents who take part in out-class courses tend to perform better than those who haven’t. Moreover, the former can have an all-round development by acquiring knowledge and skills which are not taught in their schools. On the contrary, others argue that these courses would bring about heavy burdens to students and thus oppose to this practice. They worry about that students might not have adequate time to take rest and reflect on what they have learned in school.(缺乏第 二条论据) As a university student, I have ever participated in some arts courses, such as singing, painting classes and dancing, which they proved to be helpful for my hobby development. Therefore, taking some extra curriculum courses properly is meaningful to students’
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development in the long-term.

模板总结举例:
第一段: 1. …, which is a hot point that we are talking about recently. / There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailing trend for…To this phenomenon people’s attitudes differ sharply. 2. Some people take it for granted that… 3. Since/ for/ the reason is that… They can think of no better illustration than the following ones. 4. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermore/ what is more… 第二段:5. Compared with …, … has also its advantages. / 让步状 语从句倒装 6. Since/ for/ the reason is that… Numerous examples can be given, but this will suffice. 7. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermore/ what is more… 第三段:8. As far as I am concerned,… / As to me, I prefer to the … opinion 9. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermore/ what is more…(Actually I have reasons for it.)
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10. Given all the above arguments, it is high time that …

单一论点文章
现象解释型(框架第一篇)
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How to improve student's mental health?You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1、 大学生的心理健康十分重要 2、 因此,学校可以...... 3、 我们自己应当...... Students' mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life. There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains. Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems. Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention. What's more, some are physically strong, but
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psychological problems are able to bring potential threats. Teachers may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time. Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a professional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others. From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express these is a good way to release pressure. Certainly, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue.(通用结尾句)

框架第二篇
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Attention Should Be Given to Chinese. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1. 如今很多学生不重视中文学习 2. 出现这种现象的原因和后果 3. 我认为 In recent years, the ignorance of Chinese has been prevailing among the students. In contrast, more and more students attach
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great importance to foreign languages since the economic globalization. In this essay, I will discuss the factors and consequences of this phenomenon and offer my own view on it. There are a number of factors which can be attributed to this situation. One of the most common factors is that the majority of people hold a view that English is the dominant language in the world and we should give priority to it. Moreover, although Chinese is a compulsory course in higher education, most professors and students haven’t given due attitude to it as fewer courses and credits are distributed to Chinese and fewer students attend the class or choose it as their major. And the fundamental factor is that most students take it for granted that Chinese is their mother tongue and they have already mastered it. As far as I am concerned, this ignorance may be the very first step to furthermore overlook Chinese cultures and in order to avoid this consequence-- to the students, they should read more Chinese articles not only to gain knowledge but also to broaden their scope; to the schools and colleges, they should alter the traditional teaching approaches to interest more students to study Chinese such as speeches and dramas. To live, to learn, our Chinese still need to be promoted.

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单一论点之现象解释型框架结构
第一段:1. 背景描述句 (从句套从句) 2. 现象提出句 (细节提出句,排比) 承上启下句 第二段:3. 现象总述句 4. 现象或原因(一) 5. 现象或原因(二) 6. 现象或原因(三) (并列或递进关系) 第三段:7. 承上启下句+自身对现象看法 8. 原因(一) (与自身看法属于因果关系) 9. 原因(二) (并列或递进关系) …… 10. 总结句

赏析第三篇
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Will E-books replace traditional books? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1、随着信息技术的发展,电子图书越来越多 2、有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书,理由是…… 3、我的看法

Recent decades have seen the rapid development of E-books,
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there has been an increasing controversy over the question of whether E-books will replace traditional books or not. Many people hold the idea that it will not take long for E-books to replace traditional books because E-books have quite a few advantages over traditional ones. The following reasons can account for their point of view. First, E-books are more accessible to readers, because the readers just need to log onto the internet and read online. Second, thanks to the advanced technology, the cost of E-books is much lower, so it takes readers far less money to buy E-books. Last but not the least, reading E-books has developed into part of our daily life, which is particularly appealing to young users, who are the body part of the users of electronic products. As far as I’m concerned, it is not likely for E-books to replace traditional books for lots of reasons. For example, long time of reading E-books will do more harm to our eyes, and readers will find themselves more accessible to printed materials because computers and the internet haven’t yet been popularized to every corner of our life. (缺总结句) For example, not only will long time of reading E-books do more to our eyes, but also readers will find themselves more accessible to printed materials because computers and the internet
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haven’t yet been popularized to every corner of our life. what mentioned above is that printed books will ever play an important role in our daily life.

仿写第四篇
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡 2)分析产生该现象的原因 3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议 In recent years, credit cards have gained more popularity among college students. With banks’ more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for credit cards and begun to consume by them.(少承上启下句) In this essay, I will discuss the factors and consequences of this phenomenon and offer my own view on it.(范文 2 中的万能句) The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards on campus. Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, which is a big attraction for those students who have not much money for their domination. Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and hence
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reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. Drawn by these policies, many college students have applied for credit cards. As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students.(凑字数专用) Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don’t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit card debt. Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.

模板总结举例:
第一段:1. …, which is a hot point that we are talking about
recently. / Recent decades have seen the rapid development of…, there has been an increasing controversy over the question of whether …or not.

2. Indeed / In contrast …… In this essay, I will discuss
the factors and consequences of this phenomenon and offer my own view on it.
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第二段:3. The following reasons can account for their point of
view.

4. To begin with/ To start with/ Above all 5. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermore/ what is
more…

6. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermore/ what is
more…

第三段: 7. From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw
the conclusion that … As far as I am concerned, …

8. For example/ For instance 9. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermore/ what is
more…/ not only… but also… ……

10. Only in this way can …/ what mentioned above is
that…

问题解决型(框架第一篇)
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 2.浪费的危害
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3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起

As is known to all, waste on campus has become a more and more serious problem. We can easily see many students dump a lot of food in the garbage can. (缺乏并列关系)Some students spend thousands of yuan buying fashionable clothes and so on. The negative effects of waste can be shown in the following aspects. In the first place, it makes some students dependent on their parents for money, which is harmful to their development. If they don't learn to support themselves, they will be "useless people" when they graduate. In the second place, it is not easy for our parents to arrange for our schooling. Last but not the least important, there is no denying the fact that our country is still poor. There are many people who cannot go to university and many poor people still need our help. As far as I am concerned, I should set a good example to reduce waste on campus. First of all, I will refrain from wasting anything, from food to stationery. What's more, I'm determined to call on more schoolmates to fight against waste. Finally, I will pay all my efforts to save money which can help poor students solve their financial problems. Only through these measures can we hope to reduce waste on campus.
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框架第二篇
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say no to pirated products. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1、目前盗版现象比较严重 2、造成这种现象的原因及危害 3、我们应该怎么做。

At present, piracy is becoming unprecedentedly visible in China, Any product, like tape, CD and hi-tech device can be copied, not to mention book. Shortly after a newly-published book hits the shelves, people will unsurprisingly find its pirated counterparts in the stores. It has been widely believed that piracy has caused a great loss to legitimate producers, inventors and authors in many ways. For one thing, pirated products often cost much less than the original ones, so they enjoy unbeatable advantage in price in spite of their relatively poor quality. the original ones, on the contrary, sell poorly. As far as pirated books are concerned, they do great harm to the author’s reputation due to their misprints. For another, pirated products may also have negative impacts on customers since
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those legitimate producers' enthusiasm may be greatly hurt by the fact that some customers are more like to purchase pirated products. In my opinion, it's high time that the government called on everyone to start the battle against piracy. Besides, as customers, we should develop our consciousness to resist pirated products. And law should be strictly carried out to ban piracy from spreading any further. Only in this way can we put an end to piracy and create a healthy environment for both customers and producers.

单一论点之问题解决型框架结构
第一段:1. 背景描述句 (从句套从句) 2. 问题提出句 (进一步明确问题所在,排比) 第二段:3. 问题原因总述句 4. 问题产生原因(一) 5. 问题产生原因(二) 6. 问题产生原因(三) (并列或递进关系) 第三段:7. 承上启下句 8. 解决方法(一) 9. 解决方法(二) (并列或递进关系) 10. 解决方法(三) (并列或递进关系) 11. 总结句(Only in this way can the phenomenon
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of…be solved as soon as possible)

赏析第三篇
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Reading Classics. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1.阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要 2.现在愿意阅读经典的人却越来越少,原因是…… 3.我们大学生应该怎么做

It is widely acknowledged that reading classics is both important and beneficial to the character development and personal growth of the young people. As for me, nothing can bring more joy and happiness than reading those masterpieces created by great figures like Confucius and Cao Xueqin. I believe works like The Dream in the Red Chamber and The Legend of Three Kingdoms can drastically elevate one’s aesthetic taste and deepen the understanding of the glorious history of Chinese culture. The modern society is full of temptations. The following reasons can account for it. For one thing, compared with TV soap operas, sport events, and video games, classical literary works are old fashioned and time consuming. For another, in bookstores,
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“Fast-food” reading materials are replacing classics, and young writers with sensational and “cool” remarks win the support of a large number of fans. We college students should be fully aware of the important role the classics play in broadening one’s vision. Therefore, we should start reading and studying the treasuries our ancestors’ center and absorbing the essence of those classical works. Beside, we should also advocate to the public the importance of classics so that an increasing number of general people can enjoy the pleasure of reading. (缺乏总结句) Only in this way can the phenomenon of ignorance of reading classic be solved as soon as possible.

仿写第四篇
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1)目前大学生面临就业难的问题 2)分析导致该问题的原因 3)大学生应该如何应对该问题 About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation. But now, things are different. Today’s university students usually experience great
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difficulties finding satisfactory jobs. They often complain that graduation means joblessness. What is the cause of this problem? The following reasons can account for it. Firstly, with the enrollment extension of universities, the supply of university graduates exceeds social demand. This results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job. Secondly, university students tend to spend most of their time at school in studying academic subjects and lack relevant job experience. Thirdly, some students don’t study hard during the college. After four years of university life, they haven’t gained the knowledge those fairly good jobs or positions require. Facing the increasingly fierce competition, we university students should try our bests to change this situation. Above all, when in school, we should make the most of our time and put our heart into our studies. What’s more, we can take part-time jobs and attend social activities in our spare time to accumulate relevant practical experience. Besides, when we apply for jobs after graduation, we should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to the starting salary. (缺乏总结句) Only in this way can the phenomenon of employment pressure of college students be solved as soon as possible.

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局部记叙文--时间为主线
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short essay You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1. 向老师致以节日的问候。 2. 回忆一件老师的教诲中难忘的事情。 3. 我如何报答老师。 The Once per year’s Teacher’s Day will come soon. At first, I will extend the greeting of festival to my teacher. Last week, I suddenly had a stomachache terribly in the school. My teacher was very worried, sent me to the hospital in a hurry. After checking, doctor verified that I have got the acute enteritis. My teacher came with me all the night in the hospital, so kind as to look after me. My teacher fed me food and medicine on time. After struggling with the serious illness in one day and one night, I left hospital. Then my teacher helps me to make up a missed lesson of English in a few days in succession.
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I express gratitude to my teacher; I can’t recover so fast without my teacher. Because of my teacher I can participate today’s CET6. I want to repay my teacher. No present can express my grateful feeling to my teacher. And the best repayment is that I can pass the CET6 this time.

应用文
(一) 感谢信
写作策略 第一段:表达感谢之情并说明原因 第二段:提及自己曾受到对方的帮助 第三段:再次感谢并表达回报愿望。 常用句型 1.I am grateful/obliged to you for...我非常感谢你的…… 2.I am greatly indebted to you for what you have done. 我为你所 做的一切表示感激。 3.I am thankful/obliged to you for your unselfish assistance
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during… 感谢你在……期间给予我无私的帮助。 4.I deeply appreciate your courtesy and we hope to have the opportunity of rewarding your kindness. 我非常感谢你的好意,并希望有机会回报你。 5.My appreciate to you for your generous help is beyond my words.I wish I could repay it some day. 我无法用言语来表达对你的感激之情。但愿有朝一日能回报你的帮 助。 6. Please accept my most cordial thanks for your timely help, which l will never forget. 请接受我诚挚的谢意,感谢你及时的帮助,我将难以忘怀。 7.Words fail me when I want to express my gratitude to you.感激 之情难以言表。 8.Again,I would like to express our warm thanks to you.再次向 你表示感谢。 范文: Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith, I am now back to China safe and sound(安全健康的). In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt (衷心的)thanks to you and your lovely children for your kindness and hospitality to host me when I was in New York.
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Your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a beautiful memory.I do hope that your whole family pays a visit to China in future, so that I could have the opportunity to repay your friendship. I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at your home. I feel obliged to thank you once more. Love, Li Ming

(二) 道歉信
写作策略 开头段:表明写作意图,对某事表示歉意。 主体段:说明道歉的具体原因。 结尾段:再次表明歉意,请求收信人的谅解,并表示你愿意为此做补 救。 常用句型 1.I must apologize to you for... 我必须为……向你道歉。 2.I am terribly/awfully sorry that... 我感到很抱歉,因为…… 3.It is thoughtless/ inconsiderate of me to do... 我做……,实在太 欠考虑了。 4.I am afraid what I have done has caused many inconveniences
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to you. 恐怕我给您添了许多麻烦。 5.I sincerely hope that you can understand that I offended you unintentionally. 我真心希望您能理解我并非有意冒犯你的。 6.I regret to inform you that I am unable to do... 我很遗憾地告知您 我不能…… 7.I must make a sincere and humble apology to you for... 我必须 为……真诚地向你道歉。 8 . Please accept my sincere apology for.., once more. 请再次 为……接受我真诚的道歉。 9.I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies. 我衷心 希望你能接受我的道歉。 10.I am so sorry to have put you to so much trouble. 不好意思给 你添了很多麻烦。 范文: Dear Prof. Patent, I am very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me a few days ago. I sincerely hope that you can understand that I offended you unintentionally. For the past few days I have been in hospital with a continuous fever, which has thus prevented me from any academic
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activity. I submit the doctor's note. I would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task, as my health is turning better. Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. Yours faithfully, Li Ming

(三) 邀请信
写作策略 开头段:表明写作意图,向某人发出邀请。 主体段:1、说明邀请的具体原因;2、邀请的内容。 结尾段:表示强烈的期盼,并希望尽快得到答复。 常用句型 1.I am please to invite you to participate in …to be held from…to in… 我很高兴邀请你参加从……到……在……举行的……活动。 2.It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to…如能邀请 你参加……是我莫大的荣幸。 3. It is my pleasure to extend an invitation to you to go traveling with me. 我很高兴邀请你和我一起去旅游。 4.I will cover all the expenses involved.我会负责有关费用。
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5.We were wondering if the session could consist of. . .我们想知 道会议是否可以包括……(会议邀请专用) 6.I hope that you won't decline my invitation.我希望你不会拒绝我 的邀请。 7.Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation? 你能否早日告诉我是否能接受我的邀请? 范文: Dear Anne, I wonder if there is any chance for your to come to my 23rd birthday party at my house on this Saturday night, May the 8th. It would be my pleasure to share the important moments with you. I will cover all the affairs involved. In addition, since you are a fan of rock music, I am glad to tell you that I have invited our campus Rock' n 'Roll band, the "Brain break", to perform. There are also arrangements for dancing and cake-cutting, which I am sure you will thoroughly enjoy. The dinner starts at 6 pm so that we can have a nice and long evening. I would love for you to attend, so please let me know your decision. Love,
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Li Ming

(四)求职信
写作策略: 开头段:自我介绍,说明求职目的 主体段:展示个人能力、经历及求职动机 结尾段:希望面试机会、表示感谢 常用句型 1. I am writing to apply for the position of...you advertised in yesterday's... 2. To briefly introduce myself, I am a graduate student of ... University majoring in ... and expect graduation this June. 3. Not only have I excellent academic performance in all courses, I also possess the rich experience of... 4. My interactive personal skills and teamwork spirit are also appropriate for this post. 5. I would be grateful if you could arrange an interview at your earliest convenience. 范文 Dear Mr. Wang,
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I am a computer science major from Peking University, and I am writing in response to your advertisement for recruiting a software programmer intern posted on our university BBS yesterday. I hope I can take the job. The main reason for my confidence in this position lies in both my extensive academic training in software programming, and my work experience in the relevant industry which has further polished my abilities. Moreover, I have much spare time this semester, which can ensure my time commitment for the internship. Please find more details in my enclosed resume. Thank you for your time and patience, and I would greatly appreciate it if you could grant me an interview. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

(五)求学信(求学信的主要目的是写信人中请某所学校就读的信
件。 ) 写作策略: 开头段:简单自我介绍,并说明写作意图。 主体段:介绍相关工作经历、学习经历以及个人本性,并询问入学相 关手续。
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结尾段:表示强烈的期盼,并希望尽快得到答复。 常用句型 1. I wish to pursue my Master's degree in your prestigious university. 我希望到贵校攻读硕士学位。 2.I wish to apply to admission to your department as a post-graduate student. 我现申请攻读贵系研究生。 3.I am greatly interested in your graduate program in College of Law and wish to apply for admission.我对贵校法学院的研究生课程 非常感兴趣,并申请到贵系攻读硕士学位。 4.I am writing to ask for admission to your department. It's my long-cherished dream to pursue my study in your honored department. 我申请就读于贵系,这是我长久以来的愿望。 5.Would you be so kind as to provide me with some relevant information? 您能否为我提供—些相关信息呢? 6.It would be appreciative of you if you could send me some relevant information at your earliest convenience. 如果您能够尽快 寄给我一些相关信息,我将不胜感激。 7.Could you send me an application form as well as some detailed information regarding... ?您能否寄给我申请表和有关……的资料?

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8.If further materials are required, I am only too willing to forward them to you. 如需其他材料,我非常乐意寄上。 9.I will certainly feel honored if I could be admitted to your university, which, renowned for its long history and a fine tradition of scholarship, enjoys a worldwide fame. 贵校历史悠久,治学严谨,享有世界声望,如果有幸能够成为贵校的 学生,我将感到无比的荣幸。 10.I shall be glad to furnish you with any further information concerning my education and work experience. 我很乐意为您提供 我个人学习和工作经历的有关资料。 范文 I am writing to apply for admission to your university to pursue my M.S. degree. I have read the annual prospectus issued by your university and found that it has the best graduate program of chemistry. I am greatly interested in the program. I graduated in 2004 from Huabei University, majoring in Chemistry and holding a B. S. degree. At university, I took many fundamental courses in Chemistry and my English is excellent as I had served as the head of English Association for two years. Since then I have been teaching Chemistry in Beijing Normal University.
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Through my teaching experience, I have not only deepened my understanding in this field, but mastered many complicated research skills as well. If further materials are required, I am only too willing to forward them to you. Thank you very much. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

图表作文
框架第一篇
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Changes of Ownership of Houses in China. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 图表内容是 1990,1995,2000 的公房和私房变化柱状表,趋势是 公房越来越少,私房越来越多。 提纲: 1.简单描述一下图表内容 2.变化原因 3.这个变化对个人和社会的影响 Ownership of houses in China has changed greatly in the past decade. In the past, most houses were state owned. But now, private houses are everywhere. As is shown in the chart above, in
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1990, the city's houses were mainly state-owned, with a percentage of 75. This percentage became 60 in the year 1995 and then dropped sharply to 20 in 2000. At the same time, the number of private houses has soared up to 80 percent. There are mainly two reasons that account for this rapid change. Firstly, the government has been forwarding the policy to support private houses programs. These programs have proved to be very important in developing China's economy. Secondly, with the development of economy, people's standard of living has risen. They want to have their own houses to satisfy their needs. The change has enabled more people to enjoy larger living space. At the same time, people feel pressure to make more money so that they can buy their own houses.

框架第二篇
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a

composition on the topic: Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1. 上图所示为某校大学生平均每周使用计算机的时间: 1990 年(2 hours) 、1995 年(4 hours)、2002 年(14 hours),请描述其变化;
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2. 请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发 展等方面加以说明) ; 3. 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。 Students tend to use computers more and more nowadays. Reading this chart, we can find that the average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week has increased sharply. In 1990, it was less than 2 hours; and in 1995, it increased to almost 4 hours; while in 2000, the number soared to 20 hours. Obviously computers are becoming more and more popular. There are several reasons for this. First, computers facilitate us in more aspects of life. Also, the fast development of the Internet enlarges our demands for using computers. We can easily contact with friends in remote places through the Internet. Besides, the prices of computers are getting lower and lower, which enables more students to purchase them. Along with the time spent on computers, there arise some problems. The most serious one is that many students are spending so much time playing PC games so that they ignore their studies. It is urgent to let the students use computers in a proper way.

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