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基础写作解题步骤:
1.审题
2.列要点

3.依要点, 拟草纲, 组织成句.
4.构篇章,扩句成文. 5.检查润色 6.书写

图表作文的一般结构:

第一、 开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题(1句) 第二、 分析描写数据间的主要差异及趋势(3句) 第三、 归纳总结或发表评论(1句)<

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前提: 结合写作内容.

未发表意见
5%

不喜欢: 生词多、 句子复杂、 影响理解;

15%

80%

非常喜欢: 图片漂亮, 激发兴趣; 课文有趣、 话题新颖; 文化知识 丰富、帮 助了解世 界。

结论: 新教材帮助大部分学生提高了英语水平。

我最近对我班的同学进行了一次有关英 语新教科书看法的调查。根据调查显示, 80%的学生对于它感到非常满意,然而15% 的人不喜欢,以及有5%的人不发表观点。 那些喜欢它的学生认为带有漂亮图片的课 文非常有趣,覆盖了许多热门的话题,以 及提供了各种文化的知识来了解世界。然 而,那些不喜欢它的学生则抱怨有太多的 新单词和难句,使得文章难以理解。总之, 英语新教材帮助了大部分学生提高英语水 平。

? I recently surveyed my classmates about their views on the new English textbook. According to the survey, 80% of the students were quite satisfied with it, while 15% disliked it and 5% had no opinion. Students who liked it said the texts with beautiful pictures were very interesting, covering many hot topics and providing lots of cultural knowledge to learn about the world. However, students who disliked it complained that there were too many new words and difficult sentences, making the texts difficult to understand. In conclusion, the new English textbook has helped most students improve their English enormously.

一 审题

2007年广东省英语高考题基础写作

上周,我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题,在2600名学 生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据: [写作内容] 偶像 女生 男生 根据以上数据,写一篇短 文,包括以下内容: 18% 18% 伟人 1.调查时间、调查问题以 及调查对象; 25% 11% 父母 2.男女生在以明星为偶像 方面的差异; 影视明星 50% 14% 3.“父母”在男女生偶像 体育明星 6% 48% 中的排序差异; 4.男女生在以伟人为偶像 9% 没有偶像 1% 方面的异同; 5.你的偶像及理由。

二 列要点
1. 调查时间, 调查问题以及调查对象
上周, “谁是你的偶像”, 2600名学生 2.男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异; 48%男生以体育明星为偶像, 50%女生以影视明星为偶像 3.“父母” 在男女生偶像中的排序差异; “父母”在男生中排第4, 在女生中排第2. 4.男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同; 18%男生以伟人为偶像, 18%女生以伟人为偶像. 5.你的偶像及理由 我的偶像是…, 因为….(选择其中的一种的代表)

三 依要点, 拟草纲, 组织成句.
1. 上周,我们在2600名学生中做了个关于

“谁是你的

偶像” 的调查.
2. 50%女生以影视明星为偶像, 而48%男生以体育明 星为偶像. 3. “父母”在女生偶像中排列第二, 而在男生偶像中 却排列倒数第二.

4. 男生在选择以伟人为偶像的百分比跟女生选择的 百分比一样.
5. 我的偶像是…, 因为….

1. 上周,我们在2600名学生中做了个关于 “谁是你的 1. Last week, we did a survey among 偶像” 的调查. 2,600 students

on “Who is your idol”.

2. 50%女生以影视明星为偶像, 而48%男生以体育明星为偶像. 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as 2. their idols, but 48% of the boys choose sports stars. 3.“Parents” is the second in the而在男生偶像列表中却排 3. “父母”在女生偶像列表中排列第二, girl’s list, but the 列倒数第二. second from the bottom in the boys’ list. 4.The percentage of the boys who choose “great 4. 男生在选择以伟人为偶像的百分比跟女生选择的百分比的一样. figures” is the same as the percentage of the girls. 5.My idol is …,因为….. …. 5. 我的偶像是…, because

四 构篇章,扩句成文.

Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who is your idol”. 50% of the girls choose film and TV 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, but 48% of the boys choose sports stars. stars. “Parents” is the second in the girl’s list, but the second from the bottom in the boys’ list. The percentage The percentage of the boys who choose “great figures” is the same as the percentage of the girls. percentage of the girls. My idol is …, because …. 注意: 文章的结构,句子的连贯性.

四 构篇章,扩句成文.
Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who is your idol”.The result shows that __________________50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, but 48% of the Furthermore, boys choose sports stars. _____________ “Parents” is the second in the girl’s list, but the second from the bottom in the boys’ list. _____________the percentage of the boys However, who choose “great figures” is the same as the percentage As for myself, of the girls. ________________My idol is …, because ….

五 检查润色
① Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who is your idol”.② The result shows that _________________________50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, but 48% prefer/ favor… ③What’s more, of the boys choose sports stars. _____________ “parents” while is the second in the girl’s list, but the second from the ④ However, bottom in the boys’ list. _____________the percentage of the boys who choose “great figures” is the same as thethat percentage of the girls. ⑤ As for myself, ________________my idol is …, because ….

Possible version:
Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who is your idol”. The survey shows that 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the bys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, My idol is Thomas Edison, because his inventions has greatly changed our life.

六 书写 Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who is your idol”. The result shows that 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. What’s more, “parents” is the second in the girl’s list, but the second from the bottom in the boys’ list. However, the percentage of the boys who choose “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, my idol is …, because ….

Last week, we had a survey among 2600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. The survey shows that 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, 18% of the girls choose “great figures”, that is, the percentage of the boys is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, my mother is my idol, because she not only gave birth to me, has brought me up and loves me but also supports our poor family.

上周,我们在2600名学生当中进行了 有关“谁是你的偶像”的调查。调查表明 50%的女生选择电影和电视明星作为他们 的偶像,而48%的男生则喜欢体育明星。 根据数据显示,“父母”在女生中排名第 二,但在男生中则排第四。然而,18%的 女生选择“伟人”,这也就是说,跟男生 的人数一样。我的母亲是我的偶像,因为 她不仅生我,养我,爱我,而且还一直支 撑着我们这个贫穷的家。

实战演练
基础写作 星期一, 我们开了个班会讨论 “上大学是高中生 唯一的出路吗?” 以下图表是讨论结果.
Percentage
60 50 40 30 20 10 0 上大学 无所谓 不上大学

Is it the only way out to go to college?

写作内容:
根据以上图表数据, 写一篇短文, 包括以下内容;

1. 增长知识,提高素养(quality), 利于择业
2. 成功的路不只一条. 3. 学费(tuition)高,就业难. 4. 你的观点及原因.

写作要求:
1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.

评分标准:
句子结构准确; 信息内容完整; 篇章结构连贯.

一、审题:(四确定) 1.确定类型 2. 确定体裁 3. 确定主体时态 4. 确定主体人称 图表型 说明文 一般现在时 第一人称/第三人称

二 列要点
1. 讨论时间,讨论问题以及讨论地点.
星期一, 上大学是否是高中生唯一的出路, 班会课上. 2. 增长知识,提高素养(qualities), 利于择业 60%的同学认为要上大学, … 3. 成功的路不只一条.

30%的同学认为上不上大学无所谓,…
4. 学费(tuition)高, 就业难. 10%的同学不上大学,… 5. 你的观点及原因. 就我来说…, 因为…

三 依要点, 拟草纲, 组织成句.
1. 星期一我们在班会课上就 on “is it the only way out for We had a discussion “上大学是不是高中生唯一的出路” 展开了讨论. senior students to go to college?” at our class

meeting on Monday.
60% of us consider it very necessary to 因为上大学不仅可以增 2.60%的同学认为高中生毕业后应上大学, go to college because it can help us to improve our knowledge as well as our quality, 长我们的知识, 提高我们的素养, 还有利于我们选择职业. which will be an advantage to find a good job. There are 30% of the students think that “All roads lead to 3.30%的同学认为, 成功的路不只一条, 我们不一定要上大学. Rome”, and think it is not important whether they go to college or not.

10% students think that they don’t go to college for 4.10%的同学认为, 大学学费高, 毕业后就业难度大, 不想要上大 its high tuition and the difficulty of finding jobs after 学. graduation.
5.在我看来, …

On Monday, we had a discussion about whether it is the only way out for senior students to go to college at the class meeting. 60% of us consider it very necessary to go to college because it can help us to improve our knowledge as well as our quality, which will be an advantage to find a good job. 30% of the students hold the view of “all roads lead to Rome”, thinking it doesn’t make any difference whether they will go to college or not. However, the others confirm they don’t go to college for its high tuition and it is hard for college graduates to find jobs. In my opinion, we can receive a better education at college so that we can make greater contributions in the future.

根据所给图表,用5句话写一篇题为“电影与电视”的短文。 短文须包括以下要求: A. 电影观众人数呈逐年下降趋势; B. 电视观众人数越来越多(原因:方便、经济、选择范围); C. 然而还是有人喜欢看电影(原因:气氛、娱乐)。 参考词汇: decrease v. 下降 atmosphere n. 氛围 entertainment n. 娱乐 film goer/TV watcher电影/电视观众 A 100
90 80 70 60 50 40 30 20 10 0 1995

Number of People (in thousands) (a): Number of TV watchers (b): Number of film goers B
1997 1999 2001 2003 2005

参考范文:
1 From the table, we can see that film is giving way to TV in our city. 2For example, in 1992, there were less than 10 thousand TV watchers, more than 80 thousand film goers, while in 2002, we had about 1 million TV watchers but only about 10 thousand film goers. 3The number of film goers is decreasing and that of TV watchers is increasing. 4Televisions are quite common nowadays and so more and more people turn to TV because it is convenient and cheap and watchers have a wide range of programs for them to choose from. 5At the same time, there are still some people who prefer films because they like the atmosphere in the cinema as well as the entertainment


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