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高考英语书面表达写作指导课件


Fang Xian No.1 Middle School

Logic(逻辑性)
Key sentences (信息句)

Key words (信息词)

审题
Genre(体裁) Tense(时态)

Person(人称)

请仔细观看左边漫画,结合 自

己的实际生活,写一篇 关于“节能环保”的英语短文

要求: 1 简要描述图中的现象; 2 分析产生这种现象的 原因(如:没有良好 的习惯等); 3提出你的建议。

提示:图中在睡觉的是 小明,妇女是他的母亲

Task1:A model with some missing key words. Answers varies. Para.1

As can be seen in the picture, Late at midfalls on night, Xiao Ming______asleep with TV _____, which always annoys his mother. And his mother enters,complaining _________ him for forgetting to turn TV off.

Para.2

The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that we are wasting electricity and ignore the importance of saving energy ________ resources. case above? What is it that accounts for the _______ sense / awareness Firstly, Lack of __________ of saving energy is a major cause, which, of course, leads to such a bad habit. Secondly, there being no strict laws to obey in society, the public will easily forget their duty.

Para.3

environmentally

Therefore, if we intend to live an _________ friendly life, we should make it our habit to turn off electrical equipment. In a word, what we protect should do is to __________our environment through small things in our daily life. Every tiny action counts.

To judge whether they can be used in the writing With the development of science, our earth is becoming dirtier than before,illogical But many people have not realized the problem now.

Hearing the sound of “ZZZ”, Xiaoming’s mother came to the TV and shouted angrily, “ Why do you informal always forget to turn off TV!” But the reply from Xiaoming was just more “ZZZZZ….”
The picture is talking about mother and the son. The son is sleeping and thetoo mother is trying to turn simple off the TV.

As can be seen in the picture, …… The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that…..

Task2: Make a list of key sentences in the model writing.

What is it that accounts for the above case? Firstly, ….Secondly,….

Therefore, if you intend to…. In short, / In a word, what we should do is …….. be Every tiny action counts. valuable

Task3: Let’s imitate more key sentences!

1 …Xiao Ming falls asleep with/ leaving TV on, which always annoys his mother.
模仿要点: with +n. +宾补

模仿1:Somebody is sleeping in the class now. His eyes are open.
Somebody is sleeping in the class now, __________________. with his eyes open

模仿2:

The pig is standing sunglasses on here,with _____________.

2 his mother entered, complaining him for forgetting to turn TV off。 模仿要点:主句 + 现在分词(作状语)

模仿1:The children watched the game and stood for an hour. The children stood for an hour,________ the game. watching

模仿2:

score a goal 进球

The baby jumps into the air, __________score a goal.
hoping to/ attempting to/ aiming to

模仿3:男孩手拿一本书坐在桌边,正努力在书中 寻找如何解开粽子的方法。 with a book in his hand The boy is sitting at the table _____________, trying to _____________find how tounwrap _____ zongzi.

模仿要点: with复合句,+ 现在分词(作状语)

3 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that we are wasting electricity …..

模仿要点:句型 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that …

(同从)

模仿1:这幅画试图让我们相信这样一个事实: 很多年轻人正失去日常生活中的动手能力

The picture is trying to convince us of a fact ______________________ that many of
the young are losing their basic hands-on ability in everyday life.

模仿2:老师想要让我们相信:通过努力 我们可以成为最棒的学生。

The teacher is trying to convince us of a fact that we can be top students through hard work/efforts.

4 What ( is it that) accounts for the case above? 模仿要点:强调句的特殊疑问句

模仿1:到底谁愿意借这么大一笔钱呢? Who ______ is it that _____ ______ _______is willing to lend you such a large sum of money? 模仿2:到底在哪儿你才能借到这么大一笔钱呢? Where is ______ it that you can ____ ______ ________ borrow such a large sum of money?

5 we should make it our habit to turn off electrical equipment. 模仿要点:(feel. think, make, find, consider) +it+adj. / n. +to do sth. think it necessary feel it urgent ….. make it a rule make it our duty make it a habit ……

模仿1:我规定自己每天晚饭后散步 I make _____ it ______ a rule ______to have a walk after supper every day. 模仿2:我们有责任培养自我独立意识 it our duty We should make _____ ______ ______to develop ourselves to be independent.

随着生活的不断现代化,很多年轻人逐渐失去了动手实践 的能力。仔细观察下图,结合自己的生活实际,写一篇 120-150词的英语短文,描述漫画内容,分析原因,提出 你的建议。(动手能力 hands-on ability)

Suggested drafting:

1. paragraph 1: to describe the picture paragraph 2: to analyze the reasons paragraph 3: to give your opinions 2. key words? 3. key sentences?

随着生活的不断现代化,很多年轻人逐渐失去了动手实践 的能力。仔细观察下图,结合自己的生活实际,写一篇 120-150词的英语短文,描述漫画内容,分析原因,提出 你的建议。(动手能力 hands-on ability)

Key Words & Phrases

Key Words & Phrases
interesting / ridiculous have no idea / be at a loss unwrap no chances/ opportunities over-protective : care too much independent practice/ experience awareness on one’s own hands-on ability

Key sentences: Can you use the sentence

patterns to write the composition

1 with +n. +宾补 2 主句 + 现在分词(作状语) 3 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that….(同从) 4 what is it that…? 5 we should make it our duty to 6 so…..that….. 7 What we should do is…… ………

示例:

1 The boy is sitting at the table with a book in his hand, trying to find how to unwrap zongzi.

2 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that many of the young are losing their basic hands-on ability in everyday life. 3 We should make it our duty to develop ourselves to be independent. ………………..

Ten mistakes!
As can be seen in the picture, sit before a plate of zongzi, the boy is at a loss of how to open them and eventually turns to a book for instructions. The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that many of the young are losing his basic hands-on ability in everyday life. What is it accounts for the interesting case above? Firstly, a lack of awareness of practice is a major cause, which, of course, leads to such an embarrassed situation. Secondly, parents are such over-protective that their children had no chances to deal with problems independently in daily life. However, if we intend to live an independent life, we should make it is our duty to explore things on our own. Meantime, what our parents should do is give us more chances to improve our basic skills through small things. Every tiny action counts.

As can be seen in the picture, sit before a plate of sitting zongzi, the boy is at a loss of how to open them unwrap and eventually turns to a book for instructions. The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that many of the young are losing his basic handson ability in everyday life. their

What is it accounts for the interesting case that above? Firstly, a lack of awareness of practice is



a major cause, which, of course, leads to such
an embarrassed situation. Secondly, parents are embarrassing such over-protective that their children had no so have chances to deal with problems independently in daily life.

However, if we intend to live an independent life, we Therefore should make it is our duty to explore things on our
own. Meantime, what our parents should do is give Meanwhile us more chances to improve our basic skills through small things. Every tiny action counts.

Upgrade Logic (逻辑性) Key sentences 信息句 Key words 信息词

审题
Genre(体裁) Tense(时态)

Person(人称)
Basement

40 35 30 25 20 15 10 5 0

Homework

学汉语人数

单位:百万
2004 2009

请根据以上图表信息, 以More and more Foreigners are learning Chinese” 为题, 按以下要点为你们校报写一篇100120 字的短文。 1. 描述以上有关外国人学汉语的信息. 2. 分析原因 (如经济发展, 文化交流…) 3.简短的评论 注意: 短文的标题已经给出(不计入词数)


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